Adoption
Poem about son I gave for adoption11 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed this poem. I am so glad you located your son. I could feel your love for your son through your words. The poem is descriptive. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed this poem. I am so glad you located your son. I could feel your love for your son through your words. The poem is descriptive. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Tribal
Wow, this was a beautiful poem. It put off humility, sadness, and an acceptance of the grief and horror. I really enjoyed it, Thank You
Sincerely, Henry
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Wow, this was a beautiful poem. It put off humility, sadness, and an acceptance of the grief and horror. I really enjoyed it, Thank You
Sincerely, Henry
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. It just so happens that this afternoon in about an hour or so that sound will be calling me to talk with me for a while. I haven?t talked to him in several months.
Comment from teafor2
This title, the picture, poignant sparse notes, candid poetical verbiage and biographical theme combine to render (IMHO) a personal bittersweet write
with a faith-filled and pious redeeming ending. Thanks for sharing such
an intimate and emotional "life" story in your poem. teafor2
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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This title, the picture, poignant sparse notes, candid poetical verbiage and biographical theme combine to render (IMHO) a personal bittersweet write
with a faith-filled and pious redeeming ending. Thanks for sharing such
an intimate and emotional "life" story in your poem. teafor2
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work and for leaving such a nice comment. Yes this was a better bittersweet thing to write. I actually wrote the poem before I met the sun. It was something it was on my heart about a year later.
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author, your poem is heartwarming and poignant.
You express the loving pain of giving up your son; to me this is the ultimate sacrifice any mother can make.
I'm so glad you found him and your tears turned to joyous ones.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Author, your poem is heartwarming and poignant.
You express the loving pain of giving up your son; to me this is the ultimate sacrifice any mother can make.
I'm so glad you found him and your tears turned to joyous ones.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments about the poor and for bookmarking them and also thank you for making me wanna your fans I appreciate it very much
Comment from nancyjam
A beautiful poem about a heartbreaking choice you had to make.
I'm so glad you were able to locate him and I hope you are able to keep in touch.
Nancy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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A beautiful poem about a heartbreaking choice you had to make.
I'm so glad you were able to locate him and I hope you are able to keep in touch.
Nancy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind of you. I appreciate it. I do hope the key and I will continue have a nice relationship. I don?t talk to him very often usually two or three times a year on the phone.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Adoption, is a great acknowledgement of the sacrifice and loss when a child is adopted. Knowing, or finding that he was raised well would be a cool plus for sure.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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This poem, Adoption, is a great acknowledgement of the sacrifice and loss when a child is adopted. Knowing, or finding that he was raised well would be a cool plus for sure.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it very much. And yes, it was a really nice place to be able to find him.
Comment from jessizero
I am glad you did get to see the son you gave for adoption. I know you are a kind and loving person, and thus I know you must have done what was best for this child. I also like your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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I am glad you did get to see the son you gave for adoption. I know you are a kind and loving person, and thus I know you must have done what was best for this child. I also like your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review this place. I enjoy it very much and I appreciate it.
Comment from elpsog
My dear lady and good friend you are a heroine beyond my ability to express. The sadness of the adoption but oh the joy of the reunion. The story of this episode in your life swells my eyes with joyous tears.
God bless you,
Ray (elpsog)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2015
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My dear lady and good friend you are a heroine beyond my ability to express. The sadness of the adoption but oh the joy of the reunion. The story of this episode in your life swells my eyes with joyous tears.
God bless you,
Ray (elpsog)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2015
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Thanks Ray for the nice review and the sixer. Patricia
Comment from ronnie k
A very brave write, I received a message of unbound love in your poem, an act of sacrifice that gave love a front sit over selfish desire, God bless you.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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A very brave write, I received a message of unbound love in your poem, an act of sacrifice that gave love a front sit over selfish desire, God bless you.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the review and for the words. I didn't see it as thing other than doing what I had to do, that would be right in the sight of God. I believe God has richly blessed me for my choice 58 years ago.
Comment from Caressa_08
Appreciate the author notes, as it seemed to present a great insight to the reader that before the after life, you had an opportunity to see him all grown up...That must of been such a heartwarming meeting to cherish to this day..Thanks so much for sharing your true poem. I liked it very much.
Caressa
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Appreciate the author notes, as it seemed to present a great insight to the reader that before the after life, you had an opportunity to see him all grown up...That must of been such a heartwarming meeting to cherish to this day..Thanks so much for sharing your true poem. I liked it very much.
Caressa
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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It was a wonderful day when we met for the first time. When I told him why I had given him up for adoption he thanked me for giving him life. A life that others wanted me to abort...
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You were very wise to not listen to the others, then..He seems to be a gracious son who is very appreciative..I know that made your day to see him, & for him to meet you...Thanks for replying to my review....C.
