Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Prologue "Introductory Synopsis"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from JJ Rowe
I'm in! I have 54 chapters to catch up on, but am interested to see where this story goes. Looking forward to helping in any way I can. On to the next!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014
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I'm in! I have 54 chapters to catch up on, but am interested to see where this story goes. Looking forward to helping in any way I can. On to the next!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014
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There's a trick if you want to kind of read through it quickly to catch up. Click on print book and the whole book will display ready to print. You can read it without having to go from chapter to chapter back and forth and all of that. It's all in a row. I got carried away with the current story. Hahaha. It was supposed to be one section about three or four pages. It has turned into its own book. Good luck! mikey
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Great!! I never noticed that. I'll print it out at work tomorrow then :) thx!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Trying my hand at reading novels and yours is the one I picked. If I give up part way do not take it as a bad review. either I have lost out bcause of the time between chapters, or I have been ill and cant catch up. love the honesty in this prologue
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Trying my hand at reading novels and yours is the one I picked. If I give up part way do not take it as a bad review. either I have lost out bcause of the time between chapters, or I have been ill and cant catch up. love the honesty in this prologue
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, I am encouraged and excited about this new venture. You rightly point out that it is fiction because people are not angels nor vice versa. They are separate species, as it were. Some evil angels, however, have taken their ability to look like people to take advantage of human women as in the case in Genesis who produced Nephilem hybrid, and Jude -angels who left their first estate in the context of sexual impurity. Interesting that you would switch the perceptions normally attributed to males-sight and females-sound. Looking forward to how this plays out and on this one I may have some suggestions. I didn't seem to have many for the who done it write. LOL. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, I am encouraged and excited about this new venture. You rightly point out that it is fiction because people are not angels nor vice versa. They are separate species, as it were. Some evil angels, however, have taken their ability to look like people to take advantage of human women as in the case in Genesis who produced Nephilem hybrid, and Jude -angels who left their first estate in the context of sexual impurity. Interesting that you would switch the perceptions normally attributed to males-sight and females-sound. Looking forward to how this plays out and on this one I may have some suggestions. I didn't seem to have many for the who done it write. LOL. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from robina1978
The picture complements your prologue very well. I like this set up you write about. Makes a promise for what is to come. Thanks for sharing.
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The picture complements your prologue very well. I like this set up you write about. Makes a promise for what is to come. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, sounds very interesting...lets see where it takes us...by the way...how is Bard????lol...kidding...can't wait to read...Luff Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, sounds very interesting...lets see where it takes us...by the way...how is Bard????lol...kidding...can't wait to read...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
Comment from Jay Leeward
Fascinating! In my limited experience, both creative and original.
I've now read through this section three times. This last time through I was specifically looking for some nit to pick. I didn't see one.
Save this, perhaps. I promised myself I wouldn't start another novel -- I've got several I'm trying to follow now.
I do so hate breaking promises to myself. Oh, well. ;)
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Fascinating! In my limited experience, both creative and original.
I've now read through this section three times. This last time through I was specifically looking for some nit to pick. I didn't see one.
Save this, perhaps. I promised myself I wouldn't start another novel -- I've got several I'm trying to follow now.
I do so hate breaking promises to myself. Oh, well. ;)
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
This looks like quite a departure for you. Very intriguing. Lots of possibilities for stories and characters. Of course the different characters are the same characters!!!
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This looks like quite a departure for you. Very intriguing. Lots of possibilities for stories and characters. Of course the different characters are the same characters!!!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
really loved how you drew the entry with two souls just sailed beautifully in words as i was reading delightful piece of reading mick excellent piece
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really loved how you drew the entry with two souls just sailed beautifully in words as i was reading delightful piece of reading mick excellent piece
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
Comment from Nosha17
This is certainly different to anything I have read of yours before. But that is the beauty of a good writer, he varies his themes and characters and makes the stories more interesting that way. Seems very interesting, keep up the good work. Faye
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This is certainly different to anything I have read of yours before. But that is the beauty of a good writer, he varies his themes and characters and makes the stories more interesting that way. Seems very interesting, keep up the good work. Faye
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
Comment from 1954speed
This concept sounds interesting and I look forward to further installments. And I appreciate your honesty in how your beliefs influence your writing. Nothing wrong with being a Christian. I find it quite pleasant!:)
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This concept sounds interesting and I look forward to further installments. And I appreciate your honesty in how your beliefs influence your writing. Nothing wrong with being a Christian. I find it quite pleasant!:)
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
