Of Rats and Women
Writer's Block 5-7-515 total reviews
Comment from skye
Twas night... no... MORNING!
Dazzling daylight drowned Dana,
as she... as she... what?
Perfect interpretation of how writer's block affects writing. Funny.
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Twas night... no... MORNING!
Dazzling daylight drowned Dana,
as she... as she... what?
Perfect interpretation of how writer's block affects writing. Funny.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was an absolute masterpiece. "Of mice and men" - that quote is familiar to many, and I liked your "Of rats and women" variation. The artistic presentation deserves an Oscar. Works presented like this stand out and appeal to the public right away. I tried this type of presentation in my last haiku.
This one is so clever - the writer is trying to say something, mumbling and gets totally lost in the process, forgetting what he was saying. Last line is precious
as she... as she... what?
A very entertaining and professionally presented composition, I wish you luck in the booths.
Love, Y.
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This was an absolute masterpiece. "Of mice and men" - that quote is familiar to many, and I liked your "Of rats and women" variation. The artistic presentation deserves an Oscar. Works presented like this stand out and appeal to the public right away. I tried this type of presentation in my last haiku.
This one is so clever - the writer is trying to say something, mumbling and gets totally lost in the process, forgetting what he was saying. Last line is precious
as she... as she... what?
A very entertaining and professionally presented composition, I wish you luck in the booths.
Love, Y.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
Comment from JM
Your author's notes were fun to read too...the brain does tend to ramble on when it cannot come up with some sort of inspiration. Rats!!!! I liked your "D" alliteration. Fun poem.
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Your author's notes were fun to read too...the brain does tend to ramble on when it cannot come up with some sort of inspiration. Rats!!!! I liked your "D" alliteration. Fun poem.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
Comment from Kaila Mari
The story line is great, but your author notes run on at infinitum. I trust that somewhere along that continuous railroad line of words you unblock your writer's block. Good luck in the contest; you are almost there!
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The story line is great, but your author notes run on at infinitum. I trust that somewhere along that continuous railroad line of words you unblock your writer's block. Good luck in the contest; you are almost there!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
LOL... his is fuuny... What? What was I saying? Great job with this prompt. Nice presentation too.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
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Hi,
LOL... his is fuuny... What? What was I saying? Great job with this prompt. Nice presentation too.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from seaglass
Sounds heavy...what I do is leave the house and do something else. The muse is like a naughty child, if ignored she will do something to get attention.
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Sounds heavy...what I do is leave the house and do something else. The muse is like a naughty child, if ignored she will do something to get attention.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from Jay Leeward
I really hate that sudden blank that suddenly appears as the letters stop appearing on the screen. This effort strikes painfully close to home.
However, I am looking forward to the next installment of the exciting tale begun in the Author Notes. Gripping drama -- er, tragedy, er...Huh? ;)
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I really hate that sudden blank that suddenly appears as the letters stop appearing on the screen. This effort strikes painfully close to home.
However, I am looking forward to the next installment of the exciting tale begun in the Author Notes. Gripping drama -- er, tragedy, er...Huh? ;)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from Acquired Taste
Love this - it is exactly how it happens. Have done the same thing so many times. My wishes for good luck in the contest. AT=/
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Love this - it is exactly how it happens. Have done the same thing so many times. My wishes for good luck in the contest. AT=/
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, the author notes lead me to believe you are not afflicted by writer's block, lol. I enjoyed reading this and love the picture. good luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, mystery writer, the author notes lead me to believe you are not afflicted by writer's block, lol. I enjoyed reading this and love the picture. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Wow!! This is quite clever. I love the play on "of mice and men" in the title. Then you actually demonsrate writers block as the poor writer attempts to get an openibg sentence out!! The authors notes were killer. A rambling bunch of nothingness that does sound pretty good!!!
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Wow!! This is quite clever. I love the play on "of mice and men" in the title. Then you actually demonsrate writers block as the poor writer attempts to get an openibg sentence out!! The authors notes were killer. A rambling bunch of nothingness that does sound pretty good!!!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
