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Comment from risktaker
This is precious. I love the imagery, the words, and the photo. It brought joy to my heart and a smile to my face.
I like "I think I can." "It looks so easy, far as I can tell," He is fearless and focused. Thanks
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014
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This is precious. I love the imagery, the words, and the photo. It brought joy to my heart and a smile to my face.
I like "I think I can." "It looks so easy, far as I can tell," He is fearless and focused. Thanks
Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014
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thank you risktaker. Based on you name, i'd say you are kindred spirits
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ok
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ha-ha, nice, Tom, and I suppose it never hurts to try...unless you fall, that is! My son, once an avid skateboarder, coaxed me into trying it once.
I will not make that mistake again, my body is far too old for such brutality. I think I fell about five times. OUCH!
A wonderfully written little poem on the power of perseverance when trying out new things.
Well done!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2014
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Ha-ha, nice, Tom, and I suppose it never hurts to try...unless you fall, that is! My son, once an avid skateboarder, coaxed me into trying it once.
I will not make that mistake again, my body is far too old for such brutality. I think I fell about five times. OUCH!
A wonderfully written little poem on the power of perseverance when trying out new things.
Well done!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2014
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Thank you Dean. Sorry it took so long to reply
Comment from lakeport
Skateboard plans, indeed some kids are really good at riding a shateboard,that's a very nice expressed poem,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Lakeport,
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Skateboard plans, indeed some kids are really good at riding a shateboard,that's a very nice expressed poem,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Lakeport,
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank You Lakeport
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your weelcome.Lakeport.
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your welcome.lakeport.
Comment from sunnilicious
That adventuresome streak does start young. Skateboarding is great for learning balance and focus. Makes summer move quicker. Cute photograph. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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That adventuresome streak does start young. Skateboarding is great for learning balance and focus. Makes summer move quicker. Cute photograph. Nice poem.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thank you Alicia.
Comment from Capricorn30
Nothing like an older sibling teaching us as we watch their movements;
A well-written children's poem, we learn by doing;
I like the 4-5 quick tempo--a pleasurable small poem.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Nothing like an older sibling teaching us as we watch their movements;
A well-written children's poem, we learn by doing;
I like the 4-5 quick tempo--a pleasurable small poem.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thanks again.
Comment from Joan E.
As you can see, I'm catching up and note that your grandson is at least 2 years old! My nephew is Stephan Janowski, an international skateboarder, who apparently is famous enough to have his own line of shoes with Nike. Tell the tike it is possible to have a successful career in just about anything if you work hard enough! Thanks for another fun rhymed quatrain and glimpse at being a grandparent--my son is a 37-year-old bachelor--so, I have to enjoy the status vicariously. More cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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As you can see, I'm catching up and note that your grandson is at least 2 years old! My nephew is Stephan Janowski, an international skateboarder, who apparently is famous enough to have his own line of shoes with Nike. Tell the tike it is possible to have a successful career in just about anything if you work hard enough! Thanks for another fun rhymed quatrain and glimpse at being a grandparent--my son is a 37-year-old bachelor--so, I have to enjoy the status vicariously. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thank you Joan. Happy to share all vicarious situations.
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I'll count on your cooperation! Hugs- Joan
Comment from rod007
Another wonderful piece on the theme of 'children eating and at play." This one captures what every kid does , imitate their peers even if it means a little fall and a bruise, but that's part of growing up. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Another wonderful piece on the theme of 'children eating and at play." This one captures what every kid does , imitate their peers even if it means a little fall and a bruise, but that's part of growing up. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you rod, yeah, wish he had a helmet on.
Comment from robina1978
Both poems are complemented by nice photo's. Different rhyme. The first one about your grandson's first birthday and the second about him watching his brother skateboarding.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Both poems are complemented by nice photo's. Different rhyme. The first one about your grandson's first birthday and the second about him watching his brother skateboarding.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thanks Ine.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Great little write about your grandson.
He is really cute. If he's like mine he'll catch on quick like mine did at 2 1/2 years old. Now he's three and Him and his brother are doing tricks together. They learn oh so fast.
Love the write and the picture of your grandson is adorable!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Great little write about your grandson.
He is really cute. If he's like mine he'll catch on quick like mine did at 2 1/2 years old. Now he's three and Him and his brother are doing tricks together. They learn oh so fast.
Love the write and the picture of your grandson is adorable!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you Angel. I bet you are right, because the do learn so fast.
Comment from tedanytime
Fine verse thinking 'I can.'
Just noticed the little guy could be going at it backwards...ooops, we tend to do that sometimes...
Reminds of poem of little engine that could.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Fine verse thinking 'I can.'
Just noticed the little guy could be going at it backwards...ooops, we tend to do that sometimes...
Reminds of poem of little engine that could.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thank you tedanytime. Yeah, it does, doesnt it!
