Comment from risktaker

Excellent

Too precious. I am enjoying my cake, why are you looking at me like that/ To me that is what his eyes are saying. He is serious about his cake. smile I love the imagery. Photo and the message. My heart just melted when I saw his face. thanks

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you risktaker. What a nice review.

reply by risktaker on 17-Oct-2014

ok

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Hi there Tom

Hope all's well on the western front.

Super picture of your grandson and him celebrating his 1st birthday.

Poor Mum LOL

Great poem Tom

kind regards

trimple

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014

Thanks Trimple

reply by trimple on 11-Sep-2014

:)

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Such a cute baby. But such a serious face about his birthday cake. Don't fret about Mommy just enjoy the party. Rock on! Adorable poem.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks again.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Ah, yes, we're back to one of your personal photographs--and a cute one at that! I'm glad to see photography runs in your family. I enjoyed the simple abcb rhyme and the cadence. Many happy returns to your sweet, though messy grandson! -Joan

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you Joan. The first on he he 1, now he is 2.5

Comment from rod007

Excellent

This poem is simple but very effective in conveying his joy of that cake on his first birthday. I think he'll have more to lick off his face after he finishes, maybe he's saving it for later. Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you Rod. Face floor, chair, everywhere.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

And a Happy Birthday, so say we all.
Beautiful image with your heartfelt write.
Have a great day together, and lets hope for many more.
RG

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thanks you RG.

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

I still eat my cake like this! LOL What a cute little guy, chubby arms and all. You've penned a lovely poem for him on his first birthday. Save it for him!

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you Marietta. He is a cutie, but a devil.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

What a lucky little boy. Happy birthday Isaac.
Nicely written quatrains which capture the essence of what's
important to a one year old.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you Shirley. Sure does.

Comment from Angel Debbie

Excellent

A+++++ on this one! So cute
Great rhymes and rhythm. Children are so wonderful at this age put 14 more years and you may think different. Maybe.
Nice write again, great picture.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you Angel. Yes, i know what you mean having raised 3 boys and 2 girls.

Comment from giovannimariatommaso

Excellent

What an adorable picture of a happy child. Must have a good home life. The poem is dear and sweet like the cake and the mess and the innocent wide-eyed look. It is humorous.

I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014

Thank you Giovanni.