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Winter Fun.

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Comment from rrabinow
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You did a great job with the poem you entered for this prompt. Seems like a challenging form to write. I like how you make winter seem like a person. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
    rrabinow many thanks for your best wishes and review. :) Jaq xx
reply by rrabinow on 05-Aug-2014
    You are welcome.
Comment from l.raven
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my favorite season of the year....and your poem tells why...so very well described....and the picture is just beautiful...so very well written...

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
    Many thanks Linda so glad you enjoyed it :) Jaq xx
reply by l.raven on 05-Aug-2014
    you are so welcome Jaq Cee....luff xxo have a great day...xxoo
Comment from RYME4U
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Very smooth and rhythmical. The personification is well done.I like the "hatches batten" metaphor. Very clever.
This is a good contest entry

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Thank you once again for a fab review RYME4U. Much appreciated :) x
Comment from rmj09
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The personification is very good it was as if Winter was telling us a piece of poetry.
The emotions we feel are joy and surprise.
The story of the poetry moves smoothly as a skater on ice.
The picture adds to the poetry giving us a true mental picture.
...Soon I'll (chg crysllise to crystallize) your world

Keep on writing.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    rmj09 many thanks for your indepth review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Also 'crystallise' is spelt the British way. :) x