3-5-3 Who Me?
This is true for my Betsie...and my family43 total reviews
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello LoannaLois,
"I...lovable" - It happens when one is seen as a part of family.
Lovely piece of Family Poetry meeting the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme.
Simple and perfectly matching the theme wording.
Smooth flow, short and sweet.
Excellent!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Hello LoannaLois,
"I...lovable" - It happens when one is seen as a part of family.
Lovely piece of Family Poetry meeting the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme.
Simple and perfectly matching the theme wording.
Smooth flow, short and sweet.
Excellent!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Thanks so very much for reading this and writing...thank you again.
Comment from ArtGal
Oh how could you not love this little Betsie? I don't care what she does, just look at that face, as you said, and all is forgotten, lol! I'll take her when she gets into trouble. So precious, and I wish you the best of luck. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Oh how could you not love this little Betsie? I don't care what she does, just look at that face, as you said, and all is forgotten, lol! I'll take her when she gets into trouble. So precious, and I wish you the best of luck. . .Sharon
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Yep, I can't ever get mad at that little one. Thanks so much!
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You're so very welcome.
Comment from 9999pool
Betsie is so cute and how can we not love here, smiles.
She will be the naughty little rascal at times and then she will ransack the place or worst still pooh on the carpet.
But how can we punish her when she looks at us with those half covered innocent eyes and playing dumb? :))
Great write in a 575, loved Betsie to bits!
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Betsie is so cute and how can we not love here, smiles.
She will be the naughty little rascal at times and then she will ransack the place or worst still pooh on the carpet.
But how can we punish her when she looks at us with those half covered innocent eyes and playing dumb? :))
Great write in a 575, loved Betsie to bits!
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Thanks....I think you know her! Thanks so much!
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Welcome. Yes, I know her and them too, LOL.
Ritchie. :))
Comment from missjosi
Well beautiful 3-5-3 here... and its so easy to see why you would love your Betsy even if she is being naughty... Haha and so true of the family also... Such cute words and picture Kindest Regards
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Well beautiful 3-5-3 here... and its so easy to see why you would love your Betsy even if she is being naughty... Haha and so true of the family also... Such cute words and picture Kindest Regards
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
Comment from anthony shacknofsky
Hi there,
This poem says a great deal in just 8 words A dog is the one true friend of mankind that gives unconditional love and asks for very little in return. The picture is very cute. especially since I have owned three Maltese poodles since 1984.
Thanks for sharing
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Hi there,
This poem says a great deal in just 8 words A dog is the one true friend of mankind that gives unconditional love and asks for very little in return. The picture is very cute. especially since I have owned three Maltese poodles since 1984.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 31-May-2014
Comment from zanya
Now here's something of a 'fundamental' truth that needs stating and appreciating - isn't that love the 'real thing' the type that asks nothing back but just continues to give !
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Now here's something of a 'fundamental' truth that needs stating and appreciating - isn't that love the 'real thing' the type that asks nothing back but just continues to give !
Comment Written 31-May-2014
Comment from c_lucas
Unconditional love is the right kind of love. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Good luck in your contest.
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Unconditional love is the right kind of love. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2014
Comment from LYLE
Loanna,
This has to be one of the shortest and best statements of sincere love. (I wish I had a 6th star to award this poem)
Fondly, Lyle
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Loanna,
This has to be one of the shortest and best statements of sincere love. (I wish I had a 6th star to award this poem)
Fondly, Lyle
Comment Written 31-May-2014
Comment from tfawcus
So true both at the level of puppies and of husbands too. I guess that is what true love is. There has to be a good dose of forgiveness!
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So true both at the level of puppies and of husbands too. I guess that is what true love is. There has to be a good dose of forgiveness!
Comment Written 31-May-2014
Comment from royowen
A very good entry in this 3-5-3 contest entry! This is a very cute 3-5-3, I love the artwork, it fits perfectly with the entry, I think this one has a very good chance in this contest! Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
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A very good entry in this 3-5-3 contest entry! This is a very cute 3-5-3, I love the artwork, it fits perfectly with the entry, I think this one has a very good chance in this contest! Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 31-May-2014
