Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 149 "Cry"Small and Specialty Poems
9 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your interpretation of the Hexaverse form with your many examples of why and how we cry. "Cry not in vain" is a wise reminder. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 17-May-2014
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I enjoyed your interpretation of the Hexaverse form with your many examples of why and how we cry. "Cry not in vain" is a wise reminder. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 15-May-2014
reply by the author on 17-May-2014
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Thank you Joan.
Comment from harmony13
An excellent poem - I really like the format of this poem. The repetition of the word cry left the reader with a great message. It is okay to cry in whatever emotional state you are in. The poem is thought provoking and I pondered on the words of this poem.
reply by the author on 15-May-2014
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An excellent poem - I really like the format of this poem. The repetition of the word cry left the reader with a great message. It is okay to cry in whatever emotional state you are in. The poem is thought provoking and I pondered on the words of this poem.
Comment Written 15-May-2014
reply by the author on 15-May-2014
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Thank you Harmony13.
Comment from sunnilicious
Hexaverse is a new style. Good author notes. Good poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imagery.
Cry pain.
Cry joy.
Cry like a baby
And enjoy.
reply by the author on 13-May-2014
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Hexaverse is a new style. Good author notes. Good poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imagery.
Cry pain.
Cry joy.
Cry like a baby
And enjoy.
Comment Written 13-May-2014
reply by the author on 13-May-2014
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Thank you so much Alicia. A very poetic review. I really appreciate the ranking you gave it.
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It goes well deserved. Enjoy!
Comment from NicciFaye
Learn a new poem format from you every time I stop by to visit. Excellent. All the many reasons for releasing and all valid one's as well. Great poem!
reply by the author on 13-May-2014
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Learn a new poem format from you every time I stop by to visit. Excellent. All the many reasons for releasing and all valid one's as well. Great poem!
Comment Written 13-May-2014
reply by the author on 13-May-2014
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Thank you Nicci.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Another interesting style and subject choice.
It seems quite effective at highlighting the use of word associations
To change meaning.
Cry is such an interesting and powerful word with so much meaning.
reply by the author on 13-May-2014
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Another interesting style and subject choice.
It seems quite effective at highlighting the use of word associations
To change meaning.
Cry is such an interesting and powerful word with so much meaning.
Comment Written 13-May-2014
reply by the author on 13-May-2014
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Thank you Shirley. Yes, there is a great depth in that word.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Nice job! First time reading a poem like this one.
Very interesting way to write but very hard with other words! Nice job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Nice job! First time reading a poem like this one.
Very interesting way to write but very hard with other words! Nice job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Thank you Angel Debbie.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"Cry" is a good poem with an unusual visually appealing structure. It has some good rhyme and figurative language. The repetitions of the poems title in each line is a little wearing.
Preston
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Hi, Treischel,
"Cry" is a good poem with an unusual visually appealing structure. It has some good rhyme and figurative language. The repetitions of the poems title in each line is a little wearing.
Preston
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Thank you Preston. That was my own affectation, not a requirement.
Comment from lakeport
Cry, indeed if it makes you feel better, that's a very nice
expressed poem, nice in form. I enjoyed reading i, god bless you. Lakeport,
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Cry, indeed if it makes you feel better, that's a very nice
expressed poem, nice in form. I enjoyed reading i, god bless you. Lakeport,
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Thank you Lakeport.
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your welcome.lakewport.
Comment from ravenblack
We cry for many reasons as you show in your Hexaverse - many reasons with one universal common thread- we cry for release.And feel better for it.
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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We cry for many reasons as you show in your Hexaverse - many reasons with one universal common thread- we cry for release.And feel better for it.
Comment Written 12-May-2014
reply by the author on 12-May-2014
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Thank you ravenblack. That's the bottom line 4 sure.
