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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Those games are fun, but I think this psychologist chose his subjects and words very carefully. I guess they both got what they wanted in the end. Great work, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 09-May-2022


reply by the author on 09-May-2022
    Thank you, Sandra
Comment from TAB_that's me
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This is hilarious Bill!! Thanks for giving me my only laugh for the day!!.........................................
Teresa

 Comment Written 11-May-2014


reply by the author on 11-May-2014
    Thank you, Teresa, for the great review.
Comment from MIKECON
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Fascinating piece with a storyline that is fun.Loved the ending "my place or yours"speaks volumes for the piece.
Enjoyed reading and wish you well in the contest

 Comment Written 11-May-2014


reply by the author on 11-May-2014
    Thank you, Mike, for the excellent review.
Comment from Louise Michelle
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LOL - what a terrific flash of fiction. It held my interest from the get go and I absolutely loved the ending. You really used those necessary words very creatively. Lou

 Comment Written 10-May-2014


reply by the author on 10-May-2014
    Thank you, Louise, for the excellent review.
Comment from Zue65
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Ha ha, the psychologist is gay, is that the twist? Am I right in my interpretation of your 150 word story. The plot through a dialogue is a clever vehicle to introduce the characters, the setting and the twist to make one full story to a smooth finish. I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 10-May-2014


reply by the author on 10-May-2014
    Thanks for the excellent review.
Comment from Carole Rosa
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To the author of Word Association. You have a weird sense of humor, but it's a laughable entry for the contest. Good luck. carole

 Comment Written 09-May-2014


reply by the author on 09-May-2014
    Thank you, Carole, for the excellent review.
Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. I love the poem. The patient may not have been cured. But he found a partner in the doctor. There are some things that probably should not cured, like homosexuality. Society is too busy trying to get too many people to change. Great work.

 Comment Written 08-May-2014


reply by the author on 09-May-2014
    Thank you, nelliesellie, for the excellent review.
Comment from Janie King
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Oh dear...now I sure wasn't expecting that twist of events. No denying you met the prompt requirements. good luck. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 08-May-2014


reply by the author on 08-May-2014
    Thank you, Janie, for the excellent review.
Comment from Jackarrie
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you have written a very clever story incorporating all the prompt words. You also managed to score,

Well done,
good luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 08-May-2014


reply by the author on 08-May-2014
    Thank you, Mary, for the excellent review.
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest

you have included all the words in the contest

your interesting story between the psychologist and his patient was interesting with a twist with the word therapy

kept one engaged till end

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 08-May-2014


reply by the author on 08-May-2014
    Thank you, SC, for the excellent review.
reply by Smoothiecool on 08-May-2014
    most welcome...SC