Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Eternity's Length"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
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Comment from Petriesan
what I find fascinating is that what we think of as the height of romantic love and occurred and were created when what most thought of as love was unrequited.
Nice poem
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what I find fascinating is that what we think of as the height of romantic love and occurred and were created when what most thought of as love was unrequited.
Nice poem
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
Comment from Lylise
Finally! A post that isn't a chapter! This new presentation format is really in your face and you did a great job with it. Content rocks, my man. Great job. Lynda
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Finally! A post that isn't a chapter! This new presentation format is really in your face and you did a great job with it. Content rocks, my man. Great job. Lynda
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
Comment from l.raven
Oh Michael, you are so very right...love has no age to it...it is just how you feel...I know young people who have closed it off...and older who live it for what it is...so very well said...and very nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo
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Oh Michael, you are so very right...love has no age to it...it is just how you feel...I know young people who have closed it off...and older who live it for what it is...so very well said...and very nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Never locked because they are basking in shared love and never locked because really, if the lonely soul is looking, that door must stay open at least a crack.
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Never locked because they are basking in shared love and never locked because really, if the lonely soul is looking, that door must stay open at least a crack.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this 5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry has perfect syllable and line count with the proverbial ah-ha moment at the end. This is a strong entry! All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, this 5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry has perfect syllable and line count with the proverbial ah-ha moment at the end. This is a strong entry! All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
Comment from country ranch writer
YOU MUST BELIEVE AND NOT BE BITTER WHEN LIFE HANDS YOU A BAD HAND THERE IS ALWAYS TOMORROW AND YOU NEVER KOWN WHEN LOVE COME TO YOU IN UNEXPECTERD PLACES AND TIME YOUNG OR OLD IT DON'T MATTER
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YOU MUST BELIEVE AND NOT BE BITTER WHEN LIFE HANDS YOU A BAD HAND THERE IS ALWAYS TOMORROW AND YOU NEVER KOWN WHEN LOVE COME TO YOU IN UNEXPECTERD PLACES AND TIME YOUNG OR OLD IT DON'T MATTER
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
Comment from Spitfire
A good entry. No words wasted. Love the author's notes. I agree that falling in love at any age is thrilling. Excellent alliteration with "L".
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A good entry. No words wasted. Love the author's notes. I agree that falling in love at any age is thrilling. Excellent alliteration with "L".
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
Comment from krys123
Mikey, a very creative and provocative piece of poetry. Truly this soul never grows too old for love. In your home in expresses exactly that. Your 5/7/by syllabic format is written perfectly by syllabic count reasons. You've touched upon a very thoughtful premise and one that I haven't seen written about but one that should be addressed. Thank you for doing so and thank you for sharing them posting this for others and may you have a good one always.
Alex
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Mikey, a very creative and provocative piece of poetry. Truly this soul never grows too old for love. In your home in expresses exactly that. Your 5/7/by syllabic format is written perfectly by syllabic count reasons. You've touched upon a very thoughtful premise and one that I haven't seen written about but one that should be addressed. Thank you for doing so and thank you for sharing them posting this for others and may you have a good one always.
Alex
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
Comment from emrpoems
once unrequited
lonely hearts find love at last-
soul's door never locked
Perfect syllable count as required for the contest
Unique topic. Love know no bounds and age doesn't matter either.
Good luck in the contest
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once unrequited
lonely hearts find love at last-
soul's door never locked
Perfect syllable count as required for the contest
Unique topic. Love know no bounds and age doesn't matter either.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
Comment from ArtGal
Your words can't be any better for this wonderful message. If you lock up your soul, you may miss the best in life and love no matter what the age. In fact, my Mom found love again in her 80's! And I've never seen her happier. I wish you the best of luck in this contest. . .Sharon
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Your words can't be any better for this wonderful message. If you lock up your soul, you may miss the best in life and love no matter what the age. In fact, my Mom found love again in her 80's! And I've never seen her happier. I wish you the best of luck in this contest. . .Sharon
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
