The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Bliss! Our Wonderful Wedding Day!"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
31 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
I reread this story and love it. Nice writing. I think I was still on FanStory when you wrote this because I comment on the one before where you met your wife to be. Some of the things that happen to you are not so different from things that go on one this side of the with me.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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I reread this story and love it. Nice writing. I think I was still on FanStory when you wrote this because I comment on the one before where you met your wife to be. Some of the things that happen to you are not so different from things that go on one this side of the with me.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Yeah well In was glad you were still on board then. Thanks so much for the rewardless review. I saw some chapters you put up when I was in hospital overnight caught up now! I posted in the Thoughts to welcome you back. hope you can pick up some new readers.
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I hope all went well for you in the hospital and the graft is in place and will take. Than is a really large place where the skin cancer was.
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Check out the Facebook page I have pictures of the Head wound and the graft site but stick around I am going to do an update in here with same pics anyway.
Comment from Heather Knight
Lovely post. It brought me back to the day I got married myself. My husband used to sing in a choir and they sang at our wedding.
Now we attend an English-speaking Catholic church here in Madrid and he plays guitar, banjo... in the choir.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Lovely post. It brought me back to the day I got married myself. My husband used to sing in a choir and they sang at our wedding.
Now we attend an English-speaking Catholic church here in Madrid and he plays guitar, banjo... in the choir.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed that. You would have seen reference to the discussion with the preacher on finding God 's choice, as well. I am up real early today. Happens from time to time.
Comment from robyn corum
S,
It's always so fascinating to look back on those special times, and even cooler when you find out those small details that you never knew before.
Some notes:
1.) I(t) just happened that on the very same day we were to marry, another young
2.) Why?" I said. He said: "(I)t wasn't the kind of music they usually sang there,"
3.) than permission' so we just went on with it(,)" she said.
4.) of the best-laid plans. Thanks for the memory(,)" she concluded.
5.) She wanted some well-known (i)dentity to come and sing
6.) the congregation moved out (to) the front of the church to greet us as we re-appeared.
Thanks!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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S,
It's always so fascinating to look back on those special times, and even cooler when you find out those small details that you never knew before.
Some notes:
1.) I(t) just happened that on the very same day we were to marry, another young
2.) Why?" I said. He said: "(I)t wasn't the kind of music they usually sang there,"
3.) than permission' so we just went on with it(,)" she said.
4.) of the best-laid plans. Thanks for the memory(,)" she concluded.
5.) She wanted some well-known (i)dentity to come and sing
6.) the congregation moved out (to) the front of the church to greet us as we re-appeared.
Thanks!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thanks Robyn the last one does get left out just like in America you guys leave words out like "Of" etc hehe. But I appreciate the heads up and will look at the others.
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Thanks, Robyn, I made all the changes. Surprising how much you miss no matter how many edits!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a delightful story and your picture is amazing, your wife is a very pretty girl and you are still together after 30 years, congratulations, I loved your story, it is uplifting and precious, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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This is a delightful story and your picture is amazing, your wife is a very pretty girl and you are still together after 30 years, congratulations, I loved your story, it is uplifting and precious, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
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Thanks Dolly, I loved your beautiful review. I had all the top awards on these 2 chapters but seeing I added more and fixed the pictures I felt they could get up again.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the eventful destined marriage performance, it was the most important day in author's life; it was really wonderful day, would be wife (Helen) chanted psalms from the Bible; all enjoyed; the couples were blessed; I liked.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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This speaks the eventful destined marriage performance, it was the most important day in author's life; it was really wonderful day, would be wife (Helen) chanted psalms from the Bible; all enjoyed; the couples were blessed; I liked.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Hi Friend I added the Youtube of the short wedding segment for this time around also an extra photo. The soloist sang Psalm 27, I changed her name for privacy reasons. Thanks for coming along on what I hope is the final run for this chapter.
Comment from apky
Hullo Friend,
I've been away last week and still will have little time to review all that I have in my messages box.
So this is my little apology to let you I'm a bit indisposed at eh moment and can't give the kind of comprehensive review I normally do for your chapters and posts. We have a very dear family friend who has been hospitalized and operated on, so I spend most days at the clinic and sorting out business paperwork.
I know it's a fake five stars, more or less. Please accept.
All the best,
Apky (Akinyi)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Hullo Friend,
I've been away last week and still will have little time to review all that I have in my messages box.
So this is my little apology to let you I'm a bit indisposed at eh moment and can't give the kind of comprehensive review I normally do for your chapters and posts. We have a very dear family friend who has been hospitalized and operated on, so I spend most days at the clinic and sorting out business paperwork.
I know it's a fake five stars, more or less. Please accept.
All the best,
Apky (Akinyi)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Hey I love hearing from you. Have to get over your way again soon. Saw your review on MTF1958 novel as well. Look forward to more of mary's too and yours.
Comment from Sasha
This is a nicely written chapter and a lovely picture of you and Louise. It seems you badly treated for a long time, I do hope things eventually got better.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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This is a nicely written chapter and a lovely picture of you and Louise. It seems you badly treated for a long time, I do hope things eventually got better.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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No bad treatment from me mate. How did you get that? Thanks for the review?? The reference to her listening to CD's in the loungeroom was referring back to the bad old days when she was all alone before she met me.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Bliss! Our Wonderful Wedding Day!' is a great read.
I like the sound of the piano at the beginning. Beautiful.
--I truly believe that God and Psalm 27 kept you a happily married man.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this story. You looked handsome and she's a beauty.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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'Bliss! Our Wonderful Wedding Day!' is a great read.
I like the sound of the piano at the beginning. Beautiful.
--I truly believe that God and Psalm 27 kept you a happily married man.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this story. You looked handsome and she's a beauty.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Hi I think the tune on the beginning belongs on the next chapter I could not get rid of it sorry. Thanks for the lovely review. I hope you enjoyed the Men's choir. Our friend sounded even better on the day.
Comment from gene roush
Another delightful tale of your life.He asked me if I had the song approved by the church and I said I supposed you had taken care of that. Why?" I said. He said
This needs to be broken up.
He asked me if I had the song approved by the church and I said I supposed you had taken care of that.
Why?" I said.
He said
Is Nora a man or woman? It seems to me that refer to him/her as he and she.
Another spot that can use some work is:
A fulfilment of a "prophecy," ho-hum; of later "Dr" H.G.'s from back in the early 80's, when I asked him back in those days
"when will the Lord send the right one along for me?"He replied:
"Maybe the Lord will have you lead the right one to Him, yourself!!"
It could work as:
A fulfilment of a "prophecy," ho-hum; of later "Dr" H.G.'s from back in the early 80's.
I'd asked, "When will the Lord send the right one along for me?"
He replied. "Maybe the Lord will have you lead the right one to Him, yourself!!"
The perfect person exists for each of us, if we have Faith and Love in our heart.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Another delightful tale of your life.He asked me if I had the song approved by the church and I said I supposed you had taken care of that. Why?" I said. He said
This needs to be broken up.
He asked me if I had the song approved by the church and I said I supposed you had taken care of that.
Why?" I said.
He said
Is Nora a man or woman? It seems to me that refer to him/her as he and she.
Another spot that can use some work is:
A fulfilment of a "prophecy," ho-hum; of later "Dr" H.G.'s from back in the early 80's, when I asked him back in those days
"when will the Lord send the right one along for me?"He replied:
"Maybe the Lord will have you lead the right one to Him, yourself!!"
It could work as:
A fulfilment of a "prophecy," ho-hum; of later "Dr" H.G.'s from back in the early 80's.
I'd asked, "When will the Lord send the right one along for me?"
He replied. "Maybe the Lord will have you lead the right one to Him, yourself!!"
The perfect person exists for each of us, if we have Faith and Love in our heart.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Thanks Gene appreciate your wonderful review and AMEN to your last comment. We are glad we had the Eternal match-maker, buddy. God Bless. Will work on the spags much appreciated.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A lovely story of a wedding and a newly forming marriage. I'm glad the shriveled veggies came to an end. A well written story, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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A lovely story of a wedding and a newly forming marriage. I'm glad the shriveled veggies came to an end. A well written story, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Thanks Debbie another new FS friend. So glad to be picking up some new ones as the old favourites are dropping off, sadly. Cheers. There are two other pages with rewards if interested. I also added a LInk to my Web site page in Chapter 22 for a song I wrote about the store I worked at in there if interested Someone asked about the song. I tried to put the MP3 on the page but it was too big hence the Web site link.
