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Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Earth At War"Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.
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Comment from CR Delport
This is so hectic it is difficult to keep track of everything thats happening. There are many surprises around every corner. This is very well done, Mike.
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This is so hectic it is difficult to keep track of everything thats happening. There are many surprises around every corner. This is very well done, Mike.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this is an exciting and interesting development. The chaos of the situation is well depicted. The ending sure is a cliff hanger. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, this is an exciting and interesting development. The chaos of the situation is well depicted. The ending sure is a cliff hanger. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
I have no doubt that your next chapter will deserve a six. But, I can' t deny this post a six. WOW!!!!! Everything is happening at once. Surprises too. The earth itself plays the majorvrole. The citizens revol. The signal is more effective then they thought. I knowcwhat is happenig to Johnny at the enf. I will keep it a secret. Awesome twist!!! Cannot wait. NG
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I have no doubt that your next chapter will deserve a six. But, I can' t deny this post a six. WOW!!!!! Everything is happening at once. Surprises too. The earth itself plays the majorvrole. The citizens revol. The signal is more effective then they thought. I knowcwhat is happenig to Johnny at the enf. I will keep it a secret. Awesome twist!!! Cannot wait. NG
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
I'm a little puzzled by the end of this chapter. Maybe, Johnny boy got beached on top of one of them Canadian subs. Along with others, being rescued and towed to shore. That's my hypothesis. I knew Rickey was a yellow belly coward. Must been a lot of people to overtake battleships. I sense, the end of this will be in three or four more chapters. Leaving me hanging is a good thing. That gets the avid reader wanting to read your next chapter to find out what's up? I wonder how far off I am? wackydo
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I'm a little puzzled by the end of this chapter. Maybe, Johnny boy got beached on top of one of them Canadian subs. Along with others, being rescued and towed to shore. That's my hypothesis. I knew Rickey was a yellow belly coward. Must been a lot of people to overtake battleships. I sense, the end of this will be in three or four more chapters. Leaving me hanging is a good thing. That gets the avid reader wanting to read your next chapter to find out what's up? I wonder how far off I am? wackydo
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
Comment from Sankey
Another exciting chapter my friend. A lot of fantasy and reality all mixed in together throughout. Be interesting to see where it all goes. Good work.
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Another exciting chapter my friend. A lot of fantasy and reality all mixed in together throughout. Be interesting to see where it all goes. Good work.
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
Comment from faragon
This is a really surprising turn to the story. The civillians taking over! Who knew? Great writing, wonderful descriptions - I could literally feel the earth move as I was reading.
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This is a really surprising turn to the story. The civillians taking over! Who knew? Great writing, wonderful descriptions - I could literally feel the earth move as I was reading.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
