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Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Good Vibes"Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.
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Comment from Sankey
Wow! Good chapter mate. Back on review with ya for the tie being. Quite interesting as we go along and make ya wonder where you are going with it. We'll tag along for awhile. Thanks for looking at my stuff.
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Wow! Good chapter mate. Back on review with ya for the tie being. Quite interesting as we go along and make ya wonder where you are going with it. We'll tag along for awhile. Thanks for looking at my stuff.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
I think I know where you want to go with this. I thino you should. If feelings of panic or paranoia or anything negative can be transmitted, why can't overwhelming good feelings? Christine is obviously unique. That has been apparent from day one. Go for it. Let her do what she alone can do. I would believe it. NG
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I think I know where you want to go with this. I thino you should. If feelings of panic or paranoia or anything negative can be transmitted, why can't overwhelming good feelings? Christine is obviously unique. That has been apparent from day one. Go for it. Let her do what she alone can do. I would believe it. NG
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
Comment from El Coyote
Not having read the previous chapters, I find this chapter intriguing even as it presents as a momentary down time in the action. I feel as though it's time for Christine's influence to come through to thwart the enemy using her God-given talents of communication once the strategy is finalized, perhaps some type of deception sold to the enemy. I enjoyed the piece. I find the writing easy to read and follow. Well-done.
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Not having read the previous chapters, I find this chapter intriguing even as it presents as a momentary down time in the action. I feel as though it's time for Christine's influence to come through to thwart the enemy using her God-given talents of communication once the strategy is finalized, perhaps some type of deception sold to the enemy. I enjoyed the piece. I find the writing easy to read and follow. Well-done.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
