Yosemite
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Power and the Wizard of Yosemite"Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.
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Comment from nelliesellie
They are finding who the enemy is. They are finding ways of controlling their weapons. They are finding other survivors They are finding countries that may be out of the game all together. Great work.
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They are finding who the enemy is. They are finding ways of controlling their weapons. They are finding other survivors They are finding countries that may be out of the game all together. Great work.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
Comment from Sankey
Another good chapter. Enjoy all this probably the last for a while need to get back to my work. Well done good buddy. 10-4 and out! HEHE!
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Another good chapter. Enjoy all this probably the last for a while need to get back to my work. Well done good buddy. 10-4 and out! HEHE!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
Comment from faragon
I like how you are nw having them start to become a rescue team. That might bring more craftsmen & knowledge into their little community. Nice Star Trek reference. I like the old Star Trek better. Story flowing nicely, dialogue is strong.
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I like how you are nw having them start to become a rescue team. That might bring more craftsmen & knowledge into their little community. Nice Star Trek reference. I like the old Star Trek better. Story flowing nicely, dialogue is strong.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Haha, love the Star Trek impersonations. Ok, so now we get an idea of the enemy. They are from the middle east and not aliens as initially thought. Another great and interesting chapter.
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Haha, love the Star Trek impersonations. Ok, so now we get an idea of the enemy. They are from the middle east and not aliens as initially thought. Another great and interesting chapter.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
This is on a roller coaster now. Everything is being tied together beautifully. The writing here is just so damn real that I want to meet some of these people and ang out. That Star Trek exchange wa so on the money funny and what real people do. I look forward to this more than anything. Love it!! NG
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This is on a roller coaster now. Everything is being tied together beautifully. The writing here is just so damn real that I want to meet some of these people and ang out. That Star Trek exchange wa so on the money funny and what real people do. I look forward to this more than anything. Love it!! NG
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
OKay, I still don't buy the thought transmissions but I'll go along with it. I liked the little Star Trek bit.. was very human and natural, just what would happen, I think. :)
>> The Iranian's are there.
Iranians, no apostrophe. NEVER, NEVVVVER use an apostrophe to make a word plural. NEVER!
Apostrophes are only allowed on plural alphabet letters: A's and B's, since As and Bs would be confusing.
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OKay, I still don't buy the thought transmissions but I'll go along with it. I liked the little Star Trek bit.. was very human and natural, just what would happen, I think. :)
>> The Iranian's are there.
Iranians, no apostrophe. NEVER, NEVVVVER use an apostrophe to make a word plural. NEVER!
Apostrophes are only allowed on plural alphabet letters: A's and B's, since As and Bs would be confusing.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Hum--reverse mind control, ESP. So, they amplify the weaker (db) decibels, sound measured by bells. And see what they are thinking? So, they are figuring it out and going to counter these transmissions. Maybe, if the team transmit false data like they been emplying they can turn the tide and trick them, like the cargo drops. All mind games. I figure, them Spooks flying above will returnwhen they get this false reading from Christine, Johnny boy? Am I in the ballpark? These bombers have to have a fueling station. Most likely in some hangers for maintainance. it takes lots of people to run a squadron. I was in VP-19, a suadron, takes a heap of man hours and maintainance and preflight checks to keep it going. Where are they getting the GP-7 grade fuel? Bombers have a long range. Whibey Island, in British Columbia is an air base capable of hangers and a refueling point, I been there. An island would give you protection from all sides. I get a million thoughts, forgive me. Good thinking, Mikey! i will check E-mail. count your doubloons, Sir Lion King
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Hum--reverse mind control, ESP. So, they amplify the weaker (db) decibels, sound measured by bells. And see what they are thinking? So, they are figuring it out and going to counter these transmissions. Maybe, if the team transmit false data like they been emplying they can turn the tide and trick them, like the cargo drops. All mind games. I figure, them Spooks flying above will returnwhen they get this false reading from Christine, Johnny boy? Am I in the ballpark? These bombers have to have a fueling station. Most likely in some hangers for maintainance. it takes lots of people to run a squadron. I was in VP-19, a suadron, takes a heap of man hours and maintainance and preflight checks to keep it going. Where are they getting the GP-7 grade fuel? Bombers have a long range. Whibey Island, in British Columbia is an air base capable of hangers and a refueling point, I been there. An island would give you protection from all sides. I get a million thoughts, forgive me. Good thinking, Mikey! i will check E-mail. count your doubloons, Sir Lion King
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
Comment from seaglass
It is continuing to progress very well. People are finding their specialties. The venture into brainwaves is a nice probe for thinking about future possibilities. In all honesty, if they can start life in a test tube, clone animals, transmit from satellite, mind control is not a leap.
One little typo
The Russian said, "how to tell me (there) location." should be (their)
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It is continuing to progress very well. People are finding their specialties. The venture into brainwaves is a nice probe for thinking about future possibilities. In all honesty, if they can start life in a test tube, clone animals, transmit from satellite, mind control is not a leap.
One little typo
The Russian said, "how to tell me (there) location." should be (their)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
