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Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.

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Comment from faragon
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I can't wait to find out what more they find in the bunker. Are they going to use it in place of the "village" they are now living in? I especially liked the bit about the coffee. Being a coffeeholic, it really made me smile!
I did find one little oh-oh.."citizens flea their countries"--should be flee. Great story so far!

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014