Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

Yes, another simply beautiful poem that will be very meaningful for all occasions. A very humble pink colored ordinary flower gives credence to the beautiful and aesthetic of simple things in life. It is there for us to see and admire and that great peoiple can be just as ordinary besides the extraordinary.
Great work again and so delightful to read, This is what i called poetry in simple beauty.
Cheerio, best, blessings, Ritchie. :)0

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Thank you Ritchie. I like your enthusiasm.

reply by 9999pool on 09-Apr-2014

See, my muse did not let go of me even when I was on a long break to try and get away from FS, lol.
Cheerio, Ritche. :))

P.S. The new features in FS is so wonderful except i didn't like the tiny font SIZE in the Review Box and I am straining my eyes now. Is there a way to make the font size bigger than chicken feet? LOL.

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Not that I know of.

reply by 9999pool on 09-Apr-2014

Hi Tom.

I found the answer. My web setting for font size was small and i set it to large and now the words are bigger than life. Thanks for the tip.
:))

Comment from JavaJunkie

Excellent

This is a very nice little poem that fits well into the structure. There is a pleasant rhythm that creates a nice flow and I love the last two lines that create a true picture and good visual imagery .

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Thanks JavaJunkie.

Comment from barleygirl

Excellent

Sweet poem conveying many delights for all the senses. Good alliteration in the title / first line (altho it could've been a bit more freshly stated). What makes your poem nicely original is the idea of leaves taking in warmth & giving nourishment to the rest of the plant. This concept is well-conveyed to create a visual in the reader's imagination. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Thank you Barleygirl.

Comment from risktaker

Excellent

I like the rhyme, flow, and imagery. The picture draws me into the message of the poem. I love the choice of words. The picture makes me feel calm and relaxed. the color pink is soothing to me. thanks

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Thank you risktaker. I am glad it had such a nice impact on you.

reply by risktaker on 09-Apr-2014

You are welcomed.

Comment from MagKing

Excellent

A good one from you, I could only think that you're a man who loves flowers or loves to write about flowers.
This is the second am reading about flowers from you.
I see the continuous end rhymes from the second to the fourth, and the sixth to the eight.
Good job!

MagKing

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014

Thanks again

Comment from WLHall

Excellent

Beautiful photograph you took. I loved the poem with its rhyming and syllable structure; it flows so well. Great creativity with the words you used. Thank you for sharing.
WHall

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014

Thank you WL.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This poem describes aspects of a pink flower. The rhyming the pattern works together for a overall smoothness. It describes the interaction of the different parts of the flower and the its dependence on sun.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014

Thank you seaglass.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Lovely photo enhancing a well worded poem. Good job I find no fault. It is good to see nature poems with beautiful flowers. Blessings

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014

Thanks Ben. After a long winter, I was ready.

Comment from marycec

Excellent

Another peace and calm inducing poem.Your recent posts have a zen like quality. I love the way your photographs and poetry complement each other so well.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Thank you Marycec.

Comment from Angel Debbie

Excellent

Beauty said is such away, Can be seen all the day!
Great words describing the flowers shown in picture.
Pretty Pink Petals
Luscious green leaves
Spread to the sunlight
From which it receives
Life-giving warmth
That each one retrieves
To nourish the stem
To which it cleaves

So simple yet speaks much!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thank you angel Debbie