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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Bigger Enemies, More Friends"Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.
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Comment from seaglass
And a new society is born. Necessity is the root of an organized society.
I like the line--"By considering themselves superior, they become inferior." Reminds me of the bible verse that says "The first shall be last and the last shall be first."
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And a new society is born. Necessity is the root of an organized society.
I like the line--"By considering themselves superior, they become inferior." Reminds me of the bible verse that says "The first shall be last and the last shall be first."
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Yes! You have pulled this together tight. I was wondering if you were going to be able to hold all of it together. Wow. It flowed right to the rnding perfectly and i believed it. Now it's on track and speeding forward. Well done. NG
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Yes! You have pulled this together tight. I was wondering if you were going to be able to hold all of it together. Wow. It flowed right to the rnding perfectly and i believed it. Now it's on track and speeding forward. Well done. NG
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Yes, because no one trusts the govt when things are going well. Now it's even more of an enemy if that's possible.
>> Everyone looked in agreement. Christine looked concerned.
There is a long paragraph right after this separate line. THere is no way to know who is speaking. If it's Christine, then the above sentence must be included in the dialogue paragraph.
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Yes, because no one trusts the govt when things are going well. Now it's even more of an enemy if that's possible.
>> Everyone looked in agreement. Christine looked concerned.
There is a long paragraph right after this separate line. THere is no way to know who is speaking. If it's Christine, then the above sentence must be included in the dialogue paragraph.
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
Comment from Sankey
Good on you Mikey...oops I forgot Johnny right! great stoirry of a great group of people working together No spags shock horror.
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Good on you Mikey...oops I forgot Johnny right! great stoirry of a great group of people working together No spags shock horror.
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
