Immortalized
An Ekphrastic Poem in iambic pentameter52 total reviews
Comment from Tatarka2
I gave this a 6 because, if this doesn't deserve a 6, I don't know what would. You have captured the artwork perfectly, with words, it seems to me. The idea of a fallen angel, perhaps ashamed, perhaps questioning his own actions (or what he perceives to be the will of his God?) So much is said here, with the picture and the poem together. Congratulations on a very evocative piece which says so much on so many levels.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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I gave this a 6 because, if this doesn't deserve a 6, I don't know what would. You have captured the artwork perfectly, with words, it seems to me. The idea of a fallen angel, perhaps ashamed, perhaps questioning his own actions (or what he perceives to be the will of his God?) So much is said here, with the picture and the poem together. Congratulations on a very evocative piece which says so much on so many levels.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Tatarka, for that sixer, my friend, and for your incredibly kind words. I really appreciate them.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Marillon
sorry I'm so late reading your ekphrastic poem,( which I never knew) a very interesting format.
It's very good how you wrote your poetic thoughts of what you saw from the sculpture of the forlorn angel.
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Hello Marillon
sorry I'm so late reading your ekphrastic poem,( which I never knew) a very interesting format.
It's very good how you wrote your poetic thoughts of what you saw from the sculpture of the forlorn angel.
Gert
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Gert, for taking the time to read it. I appreciate that.
Comment from Just2Write
A beautiful ekphrastic poem, David. You paint a beautiful word portrait of the despondent angel, and let us 'see' him the way you see him.
Rose.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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A beautiful ekphrastic poem, David. You paint a beautiful word portrait of the despondent angel, and let us 'see' him the way you see him.
Rose.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Rose. I so appreciate it.
Comment from Zue65
Your poem deserved the all time best recognition. First time I heard of the term ekphrastic poem, another new word in my pool of poetic vocabulary. I am really amazed with the craftsmanship of the FanStorian poets. I like the message. Yes, I agree with you, this angel on bended knee, with a downcast head, maybe interpreted in varied ways, it could be an apologetic Lucifer, or a defiant Lucifer about to rise from his fall or it could be the sculptor himself, in prayer, burdened by the weight of God's laws. Bravo.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Your poem deserved the all time best recognition. First time I heard of the term ekphrastic poem, another new word in my pool of poetic vocabulary. I am really amazed with the craftsmanship of the FanStorian poets. I like the message. Yes, I agree with you, this angel on bended knee, with a downcast head, maybe interpreted in varied ways, it could be an apologetic Lucifer, or a defiant Lucifer about to rise from his fall or it could be the sculptor himself, in prayer, burdened by the weight of God's laws. Bravo.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much, nassus, for taking the time to read and review this one. Many have written ekphrastic pieces without even realizing it, and I love blending art forms. I appreciate your wonderful review.
Comment from Taffspride
An ekphrastic poem, I learn something new every day. And what better way to learn than with such an excellent poem.
You are right about a despondant pose. Truth be told that was what made me open and read your so well written poem.
It reads beautifully aloud, and I confess to reading it several times.
It is the last stanza that really sticks out for me.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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An ekphrastic poem, I learn something new every day. And what better way to learn than with such an excellent poem.
You are right about a despondant pose. Truth be told that was what made me open and read your so well written poem.
It reads beautifully aloud, and I confess to reading it several times.
It is the last stanza that really sticks out for me.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Ann, thank you so very much for your incredibly kind words and excellent review. I really appreciate it!
Comment from barleygirl
HOLY CRUD! This is awesome! I love this. And I'm not even a fan of this type of art! This is so compelling, so imaginative, so without a "manufactured" feel as you met the requirements of form, rhyme, & so on. The reader is carried along at a relaxed, yet peppy pace . . . each new pondering by the narrator is somewhat surprising in its freshness. For example, wondering what his face was doing down there . . . so imaginative! Great job & thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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HOLY CRUD! This is awesome! I love this. And I'm not even a fan of this type of art! This is so compelling, so imaginative, so without a "manufactured" feel as you met the requirements of form, rhyme, & so on. The reader is carried along at a relaxed, yet peppy pace . . . each new pondering by the narrator is somewhat surprising in its freshness. For example, wondering what his face was doing down there . . . so imaginative! Great job & thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thank you SO much, barley girl, for that sixer, and for your enthusiastic response to the poem. I really appreciate it! David
Comment from michaelcahill
Nice sculpture. I would've scooped that up as well. I love the pondering. It's very thought provoking and makes me slow down and read every word and think about it. That is a great and unexpected ending. He hadn't moved and never would. That struck hard after all the musing we had been doing. A real slap of reality. Then a little gentleness to make us feel a little better! Great piece, mikey
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Nice sculpture. I would've scooped that up as well. I love the pondering. It's very thought provoking and makes me slow down and read every word and think about it. That is a great and unexpected ending. He hadn't moved and never would. That struck hard after all the musing we had been doing. A real slap of reality. Then a little gentleness to make us feel a little better! Great piece, mikey
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much, Mikey. I'm a pondering kind of guy. I appreciate it.
Comment from DALLAS01
My first impression: Is it shame or supplication? Your questions are cleverly posed to elicit the same ponderings in the minds of your readers. They ignite an emotional response that produces almost a shared experience. Some really nice alliteration throughout. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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My first impression: Is it shame or supplication? Your questions are cleverly posed to elicit the same ponderings in the minds of your readers. They ignite an emotional response that produces almost a shared experience. Some really nice alliteration throughout. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Dallas, good question. Shame or supplication...could be either. I really appreciate the thoughtful review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Angel Blessings
Excellent palm, entire presentation was spot on your words flowed easily meaning of your verses were easily understood. Thank you for sharing. Angel Blessings
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Excellent palm, entire presentation was spot on your words flowed easily meaning of your verses were easily understood. Thank you for sharing. Angel Blessings
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Thank you again, AB, for your great review!
Comment from Bryana
Your angel reminds me of The Thinker".
I love the first stanza. You tell us when you found him. Maybe an antique show? I have a feeling your felt sorry for the angel, so you took it home.
Have a nice day dear David.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Your angel reminds me of The Thinker".
I love the first stanza. You tell us when you found him. Maybe an antique show? I have a feeling your felt sorry for the angel, so you took it home.
Have a nice day dear David.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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It's very similar, Ana. Thank you so much. I found it at a small art store nearby.
