Yosemite
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Pleased to see you writing another story although I'm not sure it will be my cup of tea Michael. I am not a fan of violence and especially horror. I like some sci-fi but not all. LOL Let's see what you have I am all eyes. LOL Nancy
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Pleased to see you writing another story although I'm not sure it will be my cup of tea Michael. I am not a fan of violence and especially horror. I like some sci-fi but not all. LOL Let's see what you have I am all eyes. LOL Nancy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Prolific writer, when do you get to sleep?! How about "Yosemite and the Struggle for Survival"-just a thought, seeing as I don't know the story yet. It sounds as if it is going to very interesting (I am not keen on horror or Science Fiction, but am learning to be more open-minded!), and I am sure it is going to be good. You write very good prose, I just see errors in punctuation and spelling sometimes. Great illustration and read. Faye
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Prolific writer, when do you get to sleep?! How about "Yosemite and the Struggle for Survival"-just a thought, seeing as I don't know the story yet. It sounds as if it is going to very interesting (I am not keen on horror or Science Fiction, but am learning to be more open-minded!), and I am sure it is going to be good. You write very good prose, I just see errors in punctuation and spelling sometimes. Great illustration and read. Faye
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi Mikey, I missed the first few chapters of your other story, due to my mum's illness, I am not going to miss this one. Your intro sound exciting, I enjoy this type of drama, horror, sci-fi, whatever people want to call it. I'll be right there with you. xsx sandra
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Hi Mikey, I missed the first few chapters of your other story, due to my mum's illness, I am not going to miss this one. Your intro sound exciting, I enjoy this type of drama, horror, sci-fi, whatever people want to call it. I'll be right there with you. xsx sandra
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Sounds very intriguing, Mikey. You can bet that I'll be following along. I hope you can take us all on one helluva' ride! I'm looking forward to reading this, especially since you mentioned elements of the horrific might be involved.
I'm sure it will be a fantastic story, given your last offering.
Good luck with this, and most importantly of all...have fun!
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Sounds very intriguing, Mikey. You can bet that I'll be following along. I hope you can take us all on one helluva' ride! I'm looking forward to reading this, especially since you mentioned elements of the horrific might be involved.
I'm sure it will be a fantastic story, given your last offering.
Good luck with this, and most importantly of all...have fun!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I am looking forward to this book. I love your imagination, I think it will be great. I have been in the park and I think it would be a perfect place for such a story. I am looking for to Great work.
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I am looking forward to this book. I love your imagination, I think it will be great. I have been in the park and I think it would be a perfect place for such a story. I am looking for to Great work.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi, Mikey.
This sounds like an exciting read. It's great that you're trying different styles and a variety of genres. You are a strong writer. As the story unfolds, you'll find the place most fitting. I wouldn't worry about that at this time. You may find that you set out to write a horror, and it takes on a completely different shape. I look forward to reading your story.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
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Hi, Mikey.
This sounds like an exciting read. It's great that you're trying different styles and a variety of genres. You are a strong writer. As the story unfolds, you'll find the place most fitting. I wouldn't worry about that at this time. You may find that you set out to write a horror, and it takes on a completely different shape. I look forward to reading your story.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from Marillion
Excellent! I can finally start at the beginning of one of your books, so I can speak of the content with some knowledge of what is going on. I like the storyline, Mikey, and I look forward to it.
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Excellent! I can finally start at the beginning of one of your books, so I can speak of the content with some knowledge of what is going on. I like the storyline, Mikey, and I look forward to it.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Looking forward to reading further. Genres are pigeon holes. Don't worry about breaking the mold. Vonnegut Science Fiction? Don't think so. Yosemite- was only there as a child before my deep kinship with trees. It is one place I plan to visit again.
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Looking forward to reading further. Genres are pigeon holes. Don't worry about breaking the mold. Vonnegut Science Fiction? Don't think so. Yosemite- was only there as a child before my deep kinship with trees. It is one place I plan to visit again.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from robina1978
The introduction of this book sounds very promising to me. I will for sure follow it. I am not sure about when I am in hospital. I have a look now at the first chapter.
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The introduction of this book sounds very promising to me. I will for sure follow it. I am not sure about when I am in hospital. I have a look now at the first chapter.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from Millibrad
This sounds intriguing. As always your writing shows tremendous insight into human nature and I am looking forward to future installations.
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This sounds intriguing. As always your writing shows tremendous insight into human nature and I am looking forward to future installations.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
