Comment from rod007

Excellent

Great rhyming with a twist of conflictual emotions all paying a game of love. Love and smote. This brings back memories of the pain I have experienced. Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014

Thanks rod. It can be painful at times.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for your romantic Tyburn, where you appear to incorporate all the elements effortlessly. I must QUOTE your NOTE: "Oh, to be in love!" Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014

Thank you Joan. It makes life so much better!

reply by Joan E. on 21-Feb-2014

Indeed!! -J

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

A beautiful romance poem.
The Tyburn format has been used so effectively to reinforce
The message of love and devotion.
It sure explains the games thatnlovers play.
I love the imagery have chosen.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014

Thank you Shirley.

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

Sweet note
Emote
Devote
Love smote
To love devote, you'll become love smote
Then true love will emote a sweet note

Very clever indeed and I must admit difficult to connect words with 'ote' endings. Great job.

Regards:

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you Stephen. Yes, glad you appreciated that.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
"Love Notes" is an excellent tyburn meeting all of the requirements of the form which require a difficult exercise of the poet's craft. But I would not call it exceptional poetry because I feel this requires more figurative language than rhyming of most the words of the same last syllable in the poem.
Your friend,
Preston

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you Preston.