Sweetest heart
loving beyond space24 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Beautiful image. Beautiful words to compliment it.
A promise for now and always and beautifully compiled. A lot of sweetness in this one, and why not?
It is that feel, that moment, that time of the year.
Best wishes,
Rgstar
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Beautiful image. Beautiful words to compliment it.
A promise for now and always and beautifully compiled. A lot of sweetness in this one, and why not?
It is that feel, that moment, that time of the year.
Best wishes,
Rgstar
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt beautiful thank you kindly appreciated deeply
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My pleasure, Darkhorse.
RG
Comment from c_lucas
A day set aside to honor the one you love should be reflected on three hundred and sixty-five days. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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A day set aside to honor the one you love should be reflected on three hundred and sixty-five days. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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thank you dear friend for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
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You're welcome, DH. Charlie
Comment from LorraineK
Wow this is a perfect poem to read to my sweetie on Valentine Day. You expressed in so many ways the feeling of love. Great write. LorraineK
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Wow this is a perfect poem to read to my sweetie on Valentine Day. You expressed in so many ways the feeling of love. Great write. LorraineK
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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thank you kindly lorraine truly wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
Comment from beautyseeker
Beautiful land lovely read, i thought it was for valentine contest..." Sweet scented feelings, petals of emotions falling" was my favorite!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Beautiful land lovely read, i thought it was for valentine contest..." Sweet scented feelings, petals of emotions falling" was my favorite!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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wonderful comment thank you kindly heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flowed well. The author's words are clear, descriptive and heart warming. The artwork and color scheme chosen compliments this poem.
Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Excellent Poem! The poem flowed well. The author's words are clear, descriptive and heart warming. The artwork and color scheme chosen compliments this poem.
Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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thank you kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Comment from MagKing
Wow!
Once again you nailed it with your impeccable descriptive words.
It's magnificent how you manage to put these words in place:
"Blind love is true
A timeless waterfall
Covering the insides
Forever young and beautiful"
I can only say well done
And good luck in the contest
MagKing
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Wow!
Once again you nailed it with your impeccable descriptive words.
It's magnificent how you manage to put these words in place:
"Blind love is true
A timeless waterfall
Covering the insides
Forever young and beautiful"
I can only say well done
And good luck in the contest
MagKing
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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thank you so much for the heartwarming beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Comment from Angel Blessings
great work! great read, flowed well,easy reading, loved the meaning of your verse. great job! Loved your presentation. Angel Blessings
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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great work! great read, flowed well,easy reading, loved the meaning of your verse. great job! Loved your presentation. Angel Blessings
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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delightfully beautiful comment thank you kindly appreciated deeply
Comment from handmadecards
Potentially outstanding valentines day poem. Your stanzas need to be more balanced, so have a look at your meter as well as the alliteration. (words that start with the same consonant & flow comfortable from one to the other: Lover, linger, longer). That said, this is a really good effort, presented with beautiful artwork.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Potentially outstanding valentines day poem. Your stanzas need to be more balanced, so have a look at your meter as well as the alliteration. (words that start with the same consonant & flow comfortable from one to the other: Lover, linger, longer). That said, this is a really good effort, presented with beautiful artwork.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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thank you for the lovely comment greatly appreciated
Comment from kiwijenny
How sweet a love poem to your love....and bonus ...you shared it with us on Fanstory.....best line....I promise forever to love you......
Well done.........................................
God bless ......
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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How sweet a love poem to your love....and bonus ...you shared it with us on Fanstory.....best line....I promise forever to love you......
Well done.........................................
God bless ......
Comment Written 07-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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thank you dear friend for the ever so beautiful comment appreciated deeply
Comment from Just Pete
I see this as a winner in the contest. So heartfelt and honest. It's one of those "I wish I'd said that" poems and I've no doubt the lady will be delighted with your effort. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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I see this as a winner in the contest. So heartfelt and honest. It's one of those "I wish I'd said that" poems and I've no doubt the lady will be delighted with your effort. Best of luck.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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wonderful comment pete dear friend heartfelt beautiful thank you kindly appreciated deeply