Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 119 "The Best of the Breed"Small and Specialty Poems
17 total reviews
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Nice Charger! Looks like a classic, original. I used to take my 69 Chevy II Supersport to the track in Fremont, Ca. It was fun and loud, when we uncapped our headers. Burning them tires was a bonus, as we approached that Christmas tree. This brings back memories. Sometimes I dream about that Nova. I had a Corvette, LT-1 engine in her and a 4:11 rear end. positraction. Munson transmission and Hurst shifter, I put in myself. It was black with blue flames. I like this poem. just for the simple reason of bringing back them muscles cars that sounded awesome! Them were the beasts, not these rice burners loaded with gadgets. I liked it simple witha lot of room beneath the hood, no _ullshi-. Nice picture, is this your car? wackydo
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Nice Charger! Looks like a classic, original. I used to take my 69 Chevy II Supersport to the track in Fremont, Ca. It was fun and loud, when we uncapped our headers. Burning them tires was a bonus, as we approached that Christmas tree. This brings back memories. Sometimes I dream about that Nova. I had a Corvette, LT-1 engine in her and a 4:11 rear end. positraction. Munson transmission and Hurst shifter, I put in myself. It was black with blue flames. I like this poem. just for the simple reason of bringing back them muscles cars that sounded awesome! Them were the beasts, not these rice burners loaded with gadgets. I liked it simple witha lot of room beneath the hood, no _ullshi-. Nice picture, is this your car? wackydo
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Thank you Wackydo. No, not my car, I was at a car show. I do like the new Mustangs and Camaros. Loved you description, I helped my best buddy install a Hearst shifter and 4:11 rear end in his '57 Ford Galaxy XL convertible, black with white leather seats. That's what we cruised in,
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Awesome! dude
Comment from darla1977
How creative!!! I honestly didn't think I would be into this, but I really like it!
Written well enough to change my mind! Nice presentation! Strong rhyming skills! Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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How creative!!! I honestly didn't think I would be into this, but I really like it!
Written well enough to change my mind! Nice presentation! Strong rhyming skills! Well done!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Thank you Daria. Glad that I could sway your opinion.
Comment from Joy Graham
Love that car in the picture. Reminds me of a red one just like it that a high school boyfriend drove. Ah the old days. I like the idea of this form having only two rhymes. Thank you for the trip down memory lane :)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Love that car in the picture. Reminds me of a red one just like it that a high school boyfriend drove. Ah the old days. I like the idea of this form having only two rhymes. Thank you for the trip down memory lane :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Thank you Joy. My pleasure!
Comment from dmt1967
This is a nice car and the poem is rocking as well I like the picture and the poem and enjoyed reading it very nice thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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This is a nice car and the poem is rocking as well I like the picture and the poem and enjoyed reading it very nice thank you for sharing
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thank you dmt.
Comment from jmdg1954
Wow! Not only have you penned a well written poem, you challenged yourself by creating on tactical poem.
Nicely done overall.
I love the photo of the muscle car and enjoyed the poem.... John
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Wow! Not only have you penned a well written poem, you challenged yourself by creating on tactical poem.
Nicely done overall.
I love the photo of the muscle car and enjoyed the poem.... John
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much John.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with car/far...need/feed...bar/tar. Good description that creates a clear image in my mind. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with car/far...need/feed...bar/tar. Good description that creates a clear image in my mind. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thank you righteous.
Comment from chicken scratch love
Haaaaa! Very creative INDEED! I thought I was getting ready to learn a new poem template...but I suppose I HAVE! Although, it is YOUR creation and I won't do that to MY imagination...but you HAVE inspired me to seek my OWN! Nice layout as well! Thanks for the awesome share!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Haaaaa! Very creative INDEED! I thought I was getting ready to learn a new poem template...but I suppose I HAVE! Although, it is YOUR creation and I won't do that to MY imagination...but you HAVE inspired me to seek my OWN! Nice layout as well! Thanks for the awesome share!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thank you chicken scratch. Yes, be creative!
Comment from Robin Gilmor
You are so snowed in that I can feel your creative juices clashing about. Your car is great and your new form ready to emerge. A lovely verse you have transformed with a great story. Since I still love
my 25 year old Mercedes 560 SL I truly understand. Smiles, Robin :)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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You are so snowed in that I can feel your creative juices clashing about. Your car is great and your new form ready to emerge. A lovely verse you have transformed with a great story. Since I still love
my 25 year old Mercedes 560 SL I truly understand. Smiles, Robin :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Thanks, yup, I remember your Mercedes. Just thinking warm thoughts,
Comment from Selina Stambi
a real car tzar .. this is a whimsical, stellar little line!
Cigars .... the best Cuban, of course!
Loved the joyful energy in the reminiscences, Tom.
There's a vibrant bounce and boyish enthusiasm that is very compelling.
In case you haven't guessed ... loved it!
Sonali
Keeping warm? :) (Another storm yesterday ... ugh!)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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a real car tzar .. this is a whimsical, stellar little line!
Cigars .... the best Cuban, of course!
Loved the joyful energy in the reminiscences, Tom.
There's a vibrant bounce and boyish enthusiasm that is very compelling.
In case you haven't guessed ... loved it!
Sonali
Keeping warm? :) (Another storm yesterday ... ugh!)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Thank you Sonali. Yup, I am doing ok at keeping warm.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
I love that you made up your own poem style. The poem was a delightful read. Great rhyming. I do love those old muscle cars. My Dad was a real "car guy". Brought back some memories. Great job!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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I love that you made up your own poem style. The poem was a delightful read. Great rhyming. I do love those old muscle cars. My Dad was a real "car guy". Brought back some memories. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Thank you Matietta. In was fun to write.
