A Book of ... Free Verse (Vol.1)
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The Gimp's Gallop"Metre ... Freeverse
27 total reviews
Comment from allborn66
Well, I'm sure you've gotten some comments about this one. The shock-factor is there. I think the underlying message may be a tad too subtle. Any message that is in this poem is competing with your analogy, and that picture of Waldo.
Barbara
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Well, I'm sure you've gotten some comments about this one. The shock-factor is there. I think the underlying message may be a tad too subtle. Any message that is in this poem is competing with your analogy, and that picture of Waldo.
Barbara
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Poor old waldo ... the places he finds himself in !!!
Comment from victor 66
The character in PULP FICTION would appreciate the acknowledgement and would also appreciate the analogy. Very interesting poem. It was fun. Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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The character in PULP FICTION would appreciate the acknowledgement and would also appreciate the analogy. Very interesting poem. It was fun. Thank you.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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It was meant to be !!!
Comment from DionysusDeVille
This was pretty awesome and that picture is just downright funny. The flow is great and the rhymes are highly effective. Loved this very much
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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This was pretty awesome and that picture is just downright funny. The flow is great and the rhymes are highly effective. Loved this very much
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much ... much appreciated !
Comment from playinaround
A strange and wonderful poem! I love the word choices and the rhythm and flow are perfect. Like singing a song. Very interesting. Double meanings throughout. Loved it!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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A strange and wonderful poem! I love the word choices and the rhythm and flow are perfect. Like singing a song. Very interesting. Double meanings throughout. Loved it!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Excellent ... I loved it too much appreciated!
Comment from Maltese Falcon
That picture is wrong on so many levels yet after reading the poem it fits. you have a though provoking poem here. well done.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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That picture is wrong on so many levels yet after reading the poem it fits. you have a though provoking poem here. well done.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thank you ... glad you could appreciate.
Comment from daymanrayne
I love the image of being the dominant one in that whole thing. It gives me idea of what to do with my possible new girlfriend and all sorts of...Anyway good job
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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I love the image of being the dominant one in that whole thing. It gives me idea of what to do with my possible new girlfriend and all sorts of...Anyway good job
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Anytime .. !
Comment from dmt1967
This poem was a nice poem I didn't quite get what the poem was about although I loved the picture I found it funny great job thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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This poem was a nice poem I didn't quite get what the poem was about although I loved the picture I found it funny great job thank you for sharing
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Anytime ... !
Comment from Jackarrie
I am not sure what it really means, I am afraid to comment as I feel I might have a dirty mind. Am I missing something profound?
He shreds heterosexual masculinity, dresses up in leather, to have sex with a male.
bounding motion before the glory hole -as Gimp loves the dash of the gallop I am thinking that this is the sexual act I am kinda dumb and kinda smart.
Mary
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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I am not sure what it really means, I am afraid to comment as I feel I might have a dirty mind. Am I missing something profound?
He shreds heterosexual masculinity, dresses up in leather, to have sex with a male.
bounding motion before the glory hole -as Gimp loves the dash of the gallop I am thinking that this is the sexual act I am kinda dumb and kinda smart.
Mary
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Check out some of the reviews I gave a detailed reply of its meaning in there somewhere ... !
Comment from LorraineK
Enjoyed reading your poem. Who would have thought about writing about this subject. You did and it worked out great. Loved your illustration. LorraineK
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Enjoyed reading your poem. Who would have thought about writing about this subject. You did and it worked out great. Loved your illustration. LorraineK
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Anytime ... glad you enjoyed !
Comment from SteveY
Good grief! What the heck is this one all about? Erect and tall he bedazzles bounding before the glory hole? Really? And your portfolio says you like to discuss theology? What the heck church do you belong too?
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Good grief! What the heck is this one all about? Erect and tall he bedazzles bounding before the glory hole? Really? And your portfolio says you like to discuss theology? What the heck church do you belong too?
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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This is one of my more liberal poems discussing political assertion and dominion. LOL.
