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Small and Specialty Poems

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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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There certainly is something so magnetic about the style and speed of fast cars .
Your ABAB rhyme poem is written and presented well and captures the adventure and addictive need for speed that is inherent, almost genetic,
In the true connoisseur of cars.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    Thank yoy Shirkey. The true connoisseur of cars - I like that.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
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Hi, Treischel,
"Muscle Cars" is an excellent ABC format poem with first four lines begining letter for letters in alphabetical sequence as required by the form. Sequencing last letters is a nice touch. Good luck in the contest.
Preston

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
    Thank you Preston. Haven't won one yet, but there's always a first time.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
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Nicely done, Tom. The poem is very snappy looking. Great photo. Cars are lots of fun. I'd love to have a Mustang . . . but not very practical in Michigan winters. Do you have a vintage muscle car?

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
    Now. But I do own a 2007 Pontiac G6 hardtop convertible. It will be vintage in about 13 years. Especially since it's the last year the made Pontiacs. It is back.
reply by Green Lake Girl on 22-Jan-2014
    A very cool car. Will you hang on to it until it is vintage?
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
    Very likely

Comment from Capricorn30
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Wow!
Excellent!
Creative!
Well-penned reverse ABC poem expressing avid enthusiasm of automobiles--easy to view--difficult to purchase.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
    Thanks Margaret. So true.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
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Nice job on this Mr T. I know how difficult this format is.. I was a corvette man myself with a 57 super charged Studebaker Golden Hawk thrown in for just the fun of it lol
good job my friend
TK

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
    Thanks Sir T. I can picture you in one.
Comment from rod007
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I am a jeep man myself but in England I had a powerful sports car before I married. I really felt like James Bond, but here goes my fantasy again. Well done, my friend.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
    Thank you rod. Alway knew that 007 was. Bond reference.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Dear Tom, my son Alastair is a big car fan, has been since his first dinky car...actually anything motorized he gets into.
This was more impressive due to your double ABC format. Great pic too.
As always I enjoy your posts.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest - great submission.
Maureen

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
    Thank you Maureen. I appreciate the best wishes as I don't usually win or even get a mention.