Comment from MoIronE13

Excellent

So simple and yet so beautiful...
Thanks for a shot of "color coding"..
I have been spending more time with "flowers" and their healing qualities and joyfulness.
Taking DR. Branu's flower power remedy elixer.
Smelling the roses and feeling their LOVE..

Way cool...

Mahina

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014

Thank you MolronE. Cheers!

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

An amazing and beautiful image in your presentation which suits the topic perfectly.
The cameo style is so suited to this topic and showcases the color all around us in all that we see but nowhere more so than in the beauty of flowers.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014

Thank you Shirley. Yes, I feel the same.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

The "voila" did it for me as that last word added such a flair as it rendered a warm satisfaction to the explosive cameo of the flower's beauty. Viola would have been good too then music would enter the subtle scene! Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

Thank you rod. Hah! That would add a musical flair for sure!

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thanks for sharing another form for our reading pleasure--never a dull moment! I enjoyed your "display" and the energy your "flowers" conveyed. You managed to add abundant alliteration as well. Bravo! -Joan

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

Thank you Joan. Alway I always like to mix it up.

reply by Joan E. on 04-Jan-2014

And you do it so well! Mix away... -J

Comment from twinklepoems

Excellent

Happy New Year! I love learning about different forms of poetry. Where do you find these forms? My favorite line, "elegant explosion of hues" (good alliteration). A colorful and cheery poem for the New Year!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

Thank you twinklepoems. I find them reviewing poems right here on the site, also under Poetry Dances, under the Home tab.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Those flowers are gorgeously colored. Lovely photograph. Good poem. It is descriptive and detailed about the flowers. Good comparison about flowers and artist. Good.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

Thank you so much, Alicia.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

A well-crafted Cameo;
The myriad of hues presented in your poetry capture the eye in the same fashion floral displays boast of their beauty in summertime gardens;
Nice alliteration, a pleasure to read.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

Thank you Margaret. You make me smile!

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

A small colourful write, Treischel.
Love the colours and the way you have portrayed the entity in words and meaning.
Well done,

RG

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

Thank you RG.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
"Colors" is an excellent cameo poem meeting the
line/syllable requirements of the genre. Paints a static picture of a boquet or bunch of flowers in figurative language.
Preston

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014

Thank you very much Preston.

Comment from linsbm

Excellent

Aside from the beautiful photo that accompany this poem,your word choices are very precise and perfect for the rendition of your message. I like Cameo poem for its simplicity. You've done it splendidly. Thanks for sharing.} Lin

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014

Thank you Lin. I find it hard not to rhyme.