Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Mary once was filled with light"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
28 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
Very well written .I enjoyed the rhythmic flow and the rhymes. The theme of Mary and Gabriel and Christmas is evergreen .Your friend's last stanza goes very well with the rest...
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Very well written .I enjoyed the rhythmic flow and the rhymes. The theme of Mary and Gabriel and Christmas is evergreen .Your friend's last stanza goes very well with the rest...
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem. I've just gone over it to improve the rhyme and clarity. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Have a lovely weekend!
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A delicate telling of the annunciation and of the simplicity at the heart of faith. The illustration complements the meaning very well! The poem speaks simply and directly to the reader.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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A delicate telling of the annunciation and of the simplicity at the heart of faith. The illustration complements the meaning very well! The poem speaks simply and directly to the reader.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your encouraging review and the good rating you gave. It may not be Christmas according to the calendar, but we can have Christmas in our hearts every day! Have a lovely weekend!
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All best wishes from the UK!
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of rhyming couplets
good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
a thoughtful message of faith so appropriate for Christmas time :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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solid use of rhyming couplets
good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
a thoughtful message of faith so appropriate for Christmas time :-) Brooke
Comment Written 29-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your wonderful and detailed review. So very helpful! Gb
Comment from Andrewfo
A beautiful, timely poem, written with a good aabb rhythm and quatrain style. It is a welcome reminder of the truly supernatural nature of the virgin birth that brought the light and hope - and, of course, love of Heaven to Earth. This remarkable event is captured in the beauty of simplicity in this poem.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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A beautiful, timely poem, written with a good aabb rhythm and quatrain style. It is a welcome reminder of the truly supernatural nature of the virgin birth that brought the light and hope - and, of course, love of Heaven to Earth. This remarkable event is captured in the beauty of simplicity in this poem.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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This is a wonderful review that brings out the deep meaning of this very unusual event in history. Thank you so much. Merry Christmas
Comment from Keturah Martin
Excellent poem which is very inspirational and encouraging. It spoke to my heart and I'm sure it will speak to many more. The rhyme and rhythm was wonderful and flowed along like a rippling brook! God bless your New Year!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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Excellent poem which is very inspirational and encouraging. It spoke to my heart and I'm sure it will speak to many more. The rhyme and rhythm was wonderful and flowed along like a rippling brook! God bless your New Year!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your beautiful and fulfilling review, I really appreciate it. Merry Christmas
Comment from lakeport
Mary was once filled with light, Indeed beautiful expressed story poem, very nice rhyming.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Happy Holidays!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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Mary was once filled with light, Indeed beautiful expressed story poem, very nice rhyming.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Happy Holidays!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for you excellent review, so encouraging and fulfilling. Merry Christms
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your welcome. Hugd!Lakeport.
Comment from Ceabiscuit
The gift of love so simple and true, He'll always be in love with you. The very words which sum upa beautiful poem, if we could all believe and be content, thank you for the sharing of this piece
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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The gift of love so simple and true, He'll always be in love with you. The very words which sum upa beautiful poem, if we could all believe and be content, thank you for the sharing of this piece
Comment Written 26-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much Ceabiscuit for your wonderfully worded review, so uplifting and fulfilling. Merry Christmas to you, Gb
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is beautiful gudbjorg, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the mother of God, Mary who carried the Savior within her. i enjoyed reading this one..
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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this is beautiful gudbjorg, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the mother of God, Mary who carried the Savior within her. i enjoyed reading this one..
Comment Written 26-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your marvellous review, and for the six stars. This means a lot to me and will encourage me to keep writing more. Merry Christmas to you, Gb
Comment from Devon Phipps
The love of god will always be in us. I love how to made the bright heavenly a symbol of god. The poem also rhymes beautifully. Thanks for posting
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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The love of god will always be in us. I love how to made the bright heavenly a symbol of god. The poem also rhymes beautifully. Thanks for posting
Comment Written 26-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much Devon for giving me such a fantastic review, I really treasure it. Merry Christmas to you
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Mary was once filled with light' is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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'Mary was once filled with light' is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your beautiful review from your heart, really appreciate it. Marry Christmas to you
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gudbjorg, you're very welcome. Merry Christmas to you too.
Best wishes, the Duchess
