Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 115 "God's House"Small and Specialty Poems
8 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
well written and presented.
Another interesting poetry style with a very aptly chosen name.
The carefully chosen words along with the set syllable count and format definitely do just that-add clarity to the chosen subject and depth to the poetry.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2013
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well written and presented.
Another interesting poetry style with a very aptly chosen name.
The carefully chosen words along with the set syllable count and format definitely do just that-add clarity to the chosen subject and depth to the poetry.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2013
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Thank you Shirey. Give one a try!
Comment from joneau2
Amazing. And the beat goes on, and on, and on. Where's your book? It such be an on-going, living entity housing the creativity of your mind. Another fine poem.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Amazing. And the beat goes on, and on, and on. Where's your book? It such be an on-going, living entity housing the creativity of your mind. Another fine poem.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thankyou Joneau. I'll work on it this Winter.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is a good poem with good figurative language, good flow, good rhyme and good images and a creative structure. For me the the last line would better as,,,"where faith is grown."
Preston
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is a good poem with good figurative language, good flow, good rhyme and good images and a creative structure. For me the the last line would better as,,,"where faith is grown."
Preston
Comment Written 17-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you Preston. I'll look a that.
Comment from rod007
The colour scheme and the picture is consistent with your poem as long as the devotees at church absorbs the Lord's words and not gain satisfaction from admiring the building as that is false religion. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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The colour scheme and the picture is consistent with your poem as long as the devotees at church absorbs the Lord's words and not gain satisfaction from admiring the building as that is false religion. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you rod. So true.
Comment from sunnilicious
I like the glass windows. They look so angelic when the sunlight shines through them. Good poem. Sensible (probably because this is a Clarity Pyramid). Nice work.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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I like the glass windows. They look so angelic when the sunlight shines through them. Good poem. Sensible (probably because this is a Clarity Pyramid). Nice work.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you Alicia.
Comment from Capricorn30
A lovely, well-penned Clarity poem, befitting this holy season;
In God's house fears are eased as we find comfort in his faith.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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A lovely, well-penned Clarity poem, befitting this holy season;
In God's house fears are eased as we find comfort in his faith.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you Margaret.
Comment from Merriweather
I think it takes a lot of skill to work this poem into a pyramid. I am also impressed with the pyramid effect above in the picture. It shows you have tried to reinforce the type of poem with it. I feel the picture works well with it as pyramid effect on the church points to God and influence here on earth. The church is a beautiful work in stone just as your poem is a beautiful work of words. Thank you for sharing your writing and artistic talent with us. I would not change anything. Merriweather
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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I think it takes a lot of skill to work this poem into a pyramid. I am also impressed with the pyramid effect above in the picture. It shows you have tried to reinforce the type of poem with it. I feel the picture works well with it as pyramid effect on the church points to God and influence here on earth. The church is a beautiful work in stone just as your poem is a beautiful work of words. Thank you for sharing your writing and artistic talent with us. I would not change anything. Merriweather
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much Merriweather. I appreciate you stopping by and offering you comments and lovely observations.
Comment from afhughes
I like this. Make alot of sense to me. It's really a poem I haven't heard of but I really like it. You wrote what was required under the definition.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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I like this. Make alot of sense to me. It's really a poem I haven't heard of but I really like it. You wrote what was required under the definition.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you afhughes.I appreciate the comments.
