Comment from
Earthfairy
I loved it. I thought it was beautifully written and a joy to read. I think it speaks to spirituality in general and I like that. Good job!
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
Many thanks for taking the time and trouble to review my poem, Earthfairy. Very much appreciated.
Comment from
Petriesan
this poem worked pretty well, the language is well-chosen.
I Wish I had simple faith, I have faith, but have lost the simple part.
nANd yes, we are too often blind to what God wants
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
Many thanks for taking the time and trouble to review my poem, Petrisan. Very much appreciated.