Big mosquito!
Something that I experienced!3 total reviews
Comment from Just Pete
This is a lovely poem about a creature we all hate. They seek us out at night and we wake up with an itch that won't go away. You have said so much in so few words. Well done!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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This is a lovely poem about a creature we all hate. They seek us out at night and we wake up with an itch that won't go away. You have said so much in so few words. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Hello,
Thank you very much for the review.
I am more energetic now to write more poems.. Hehe
Take care
Comment from bkbehera
"A fat mosquito bit me
and he flied with my blood sucked
happy that he was escaped"!
There is no doubt that the content of the poem is interesting, but it is not in 5-7-5 format.Please,count
the syllable, not the words.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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"A fat mosquito bit me
and he flied with my blood sucked
happy that he was escaped"!
There is no doubt that the content of the poem is interesting, but it is not in 5-7-5 format.Please,count
the syllable, not the words.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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bkbehera: Yup, I made a mistake. It is not in 5-7-5 format. Thank you for correcting me. :)
Comment from Ric Myworld
New to poetry and its many styles and structures, I am forced to trust my ears and eyes to find that touches me or brings a smile. Thanks for the nice read.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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New to poetry and its many styles and structures, I am forced to trust my ears and eyes to find that touches me or brings a smile. Thanks for the nice read.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Have a nice day ahead. :)
