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Comment from Selina Stambi
RIP. chey.
I could hear music as I read these lines. The repeated use of goodbye is very effective - creates a sense of finality ... no return.
A beautiful tribute to a gracious lady.
God bless you, Tom. xxx
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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RIP. chey.
I could hear music as I read these lines. The repeated use of goodbye is very effective - creates a sense of finality ... no return.
A beautiful tribute to a gracious lady.
God bless you, Tom. xxx
Comment Written 15-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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Thank you Sonali, it seemed the perfect format for these sentiments.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Tresischel,
This lovely poem is a fitting tribute and a sad farewell to a generous spirit, a good person and an excellent poet. Thank you for sharing.
Preson
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Hi, Tresischel,
This lovely poem is a fitting tribute and a sad farewell to a generous spirit, a good person and an excellent poet. Thank you for sharing.
Preson
Comment Written 13-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Thank you much, Preston.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A very heartfelt and emotioal poem of farewll to a respected fellow writer.
One can only ask to be remembered as one has lived
and for this lovely lady the memories are cherished
and special.
The Ghazal style seems a very fitting form to carry a final goodbye.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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A very heartfelt and emotioal poem of farewll to a respected fellow writer.
One can only ask to be remembered as one has lived
and for this lovely lady the memories are cherished
and special.
The Ghazal style seems a very fitting form to carry a final goodbye.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Thank you Shirley. I appreciate the sentiments.
Comment from Sueellen11
My dear friend,, your tribute to Chey( Marilyn) was so sad and moving,,yes this lovely lady we be sorely missed,, I did not know Chey as well as many,, but I remember her first reviews when I first joined this site in September,,, and having the pleasure to read some of her works ,, I felt the need to say my farewell also,,, beautiful poem,, for your dear friend,,blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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My dear friend,, your tribute to Chey( Marilyn) was so sad and moving,,yes this lovely lady we be sorely missed,, I did not know Chey as well as many,, but I remember her first reviews when I first joined this site in September,,, and having the pleasure to read some of her works ,, I felt the need to say my farewell also,,, beautiful poem,, for your dear friend,,blessings sueellen
Comment Written 13-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Thank you sure en. She wrote beautiful poetry and was a kind, encouraging reviewer.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Tom, you have my tears flowing too. This is beautiful writing with a compassionate heart. Thank you for sharing it. She'll always be missed.
Maureen
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Hi Tom, you have my tears flowing too. This is beautiful writing with a compassionate heart. Thank you for sharing it. She'll always be missed.
Maureen
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Thank you Maureen. What a shock! I went back and looked. The last time she reviewed one of my poems was 10/23. Her poem, Despite My Fear, was posted that day. It really takes on meaning now. I was joking with her about her "limp pen".
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Yes shocking indeed - same timing on my end too for review....and her poem makes perfect sense now.
Big hug my friend.
Comment from ravenblack
Chey was the first poet on the site who I really connected with, her nature poems written about Wyoming, my favorite stomping ground - and she never failed in taking me along with her on her nature walks. And I know she is walking the most beautiful trails now.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Chey was the first poet on the site who I really connected with, her nature poems written about Wyoming, my favorite stomping ground - and she never failed in taking me along with her on her nature walks. And I know she is walking the most beautiful trails now.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Thank you ravenblack. I think so too!
Comment from rod007
A great tribute to a great lady. I did not know her but I understand your sentiments totally. I especially liked these words:
"As your soul is settled, we are bereft.
Still, you've left written words as our goodbye.
So many lovely words you've left behind,
We find a legacy as your goodbye. " Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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A great tribute to a great lady. I did not know her but I understand your sentiments totally. I especially liked these words:
"As your soul is settled, we are bereft.
Still, you've left written words as our goodbye.
So many lovely words you've left behind,
We find a legacy as your goodbye. " Well done.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Thank you rod.
