Little Mouse
Trick or Treat81 total reviews
Comment from essence56
This is such a cute poem and pleasant to read. Being that I love everything that you write, my complete focus was on my reading and visual in my mind. I thought it was so cute, I shared it with my granddaughter Jada. Thank you.
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This is such a cute poem and pleasant to read. Being that I love everything that you write, my complete focus was on my reading and visual in my mind. I thought it was so cute, I shared it with my granddaughter Jada. Thank you.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, we grandmas always know when those little ones need some extra attention--another hug! This is well-written, appealing, and SO sute. Love the picture
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Yes, we grandmas always know when those little ones need some extra attention--another hug! This is well-written, appealing, and SO sute. Love the picture
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
Comment from jmdg1954
That's so easy to do, fall in love with them over and over. My two grandchildren live 1000 miles away, so the photos ate a blessing.
Great poem, photo and author notes... John
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That's so easy to do, fall in love with them over and over. My two grandchildren live 1000 miles away, so the photos ate a blessing.
Great poem, photo and author notes... John
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
Comment from SteveY
Wow, what a wonderful little picture that you've chosen to go along with your very creative writing and imagination. Great job with this one.
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Wow, what a wonderful little picture that you've chosen to go along with your very creative writing and imagination. Great job with this one.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
Comment from Emeka13
A cute little grand daughter. Lucky you. In the poem you thought like a child, you spoke like a child and like the grandma you are you know all too well the magic in a kiss on the cheek. Well done. Remain blessed. Emeka
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A cute little grand daughter. Lucky you. In the poem you thought like a child, you spoke like a child and like the grandma you are you know all too well the magic in a kiss on the cheek. Well done. Remain blessed. Emeka
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
Comment from Ben Colder
Precious. Nothing like little ones. Mine steal my heart. Yep even the great Grand children too. Well done with nice poem. The photo is right on.
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Precious. Nothing like little ones. Mine steal my heart. Yep even the great Grand children too. Well done with nice poem. The photo is right on.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
Comment from brentman99
A very cute poem with a nice picture. It's hard to not love one like this. Photos like this make great blackmail material prior to their wedding day. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
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A very cute poem with a nice picture. It's hard to not love one like this. Photos like this make great blackmail material prior to their wedding day. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
Comment from kzak4151
This is a very darling poem. Your poem flows and rhymes perfectly. "I'm a kissing bug" sounds precisely what a little one would say to their Grandma. Great write!
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This is a very darling poem. Your poem flows and rhymes perfectly. "I'm a kissing bug" sounds precisely what a little one would say to their Grandma. Great write!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
Comment from JonnyRhymes
This is a sweet poem in wich you capture the essence of childhood and your love for your granddaughter very well indeed. Nice, crisp, simple rhymes too. Well done!
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This is a sweet poem in wich you capture the essence of childhood and your love for your granddaughter very well indeed. Nice, crisp, simple rhymes too. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
Comment from rouskin
It really deserves All Time Best
My favorite lines
"Grandma, 'bout that hug
I'm a kissing bug."
Without a critique
Grandma kissed her cheek.
Thank you for sharing and have a nice day
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It really deserves All Time Best
My favorite lines
"Grandma, 'bout that hug
I'm a kissing bug."
Without a critique
Grandma kissed her cheek.
Thank you for sharing and have a nice day
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
