Response From Your Courtesan
What you do not see...53 total reviews
Comment from Clarekr
This is a sad but beautiful poem. I like its structure and the lyrical flow of the poem. The first stanza grabs the reader. Nice job.
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This is a sad but beautiful poem. I like its structure and the lyrical flow of the poem. The first stanza grabs the reader. Nice job.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I hope this is just a write and not reality. If it is reality I feel for you. It has happened to me too. Thank you for sharing and writing is the best medicine.
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I hope this is just a write and not reality. If it is reality I feel for you. It has happened to me too. Thank you for sharing and writing is the best medicine.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
Comment from mystery poet
You have written such a touching heart felt verse
with raw emotion, the real kind others can relate
to and it takes great talent to write from the
heart as you do. Glad I didn't miss out on this
read and wish you all the best...
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You have written such a touching heart felt verse
with raw emotion, the real kind others can relate
to and it takes great talent to write from the
heart as you do. Glad I didn't miss out on this
read and wish you all the best...
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
Comment from GWHARGIS
Is this a letter to the man from a mistress? I liked the simple nature but it was filled with some very heavy thoughts. I liked the imagery and the many senses that she talked about. Nicely done.
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Is this a letter to the man from a mistress? I liked the simple nature but it was filled with some very heavy thoughts. I liked the imagery and the many senses that she talked about. Nicely done.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Uptowngirlchef1961,
What a marvelous piece of Romance Poetry fully drenched with love and nothing, but only love!
It beautifully depicts the real feelings of love. Its wording is simple, perfectly matching the theme, having spontaneous enchanting flow from top to bottom, with its own rhythm and lively imagery.
"You cannot expect me to
read your mind
while
I am losing mine."
These are particularly the most striking lines. Its structure is also worth appreciating.
Both in tone and tenor, Superb!
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Hello Uptowngirlchef1961,
What a marvelous piece of Romance Poetry fully drenched with love and nothing, but only love!
It beautifully depicts the real feelings of love. Its wording is simple, perfectly matching the theme, having spontaneous enchanting flow from top to bottom, with its own rhythm and lively imagery.
"You cannot expect me to
read your mind
while
I am losing mine."
These are particularly the most striking lines. Its structure is also worth appreciating.
Both in tone and tenor, Superb!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
Comment from Norbanus
As often is the case with tales in verse
The story hides in words from thoughts astray
Those of us whose thoughts are muddled worse
Will send our battered muse to disarray
As said by someone long ago
Survive the fire and you will grow
As time goes on, when warmed by wrath
vengeance points down the wrong path
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As often is the case with tales in verse
The story hides in words from thoughts astray
Those of us whose thoughts are muddled worse
Will send our battered muse to disarray
As said by someone long ago
Survive the fire and you will grow
As time goes on, when warmed by wrath
vengeance points down the wrong path
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a poem written from the heart of a person who knows she is not entitled to the love she craves, because that love belongs to somebody else. I am assuming it is a mistress that is writing this poem of longing for him.
You cannot expect me to
read your mind
while
I am losing mine.
This suggest to me that he made promises he is not going to keep.
Well written Mary
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This is a poem written from the heart of a person who knows she is not entitled to the love she craves, because that love belongs to somebody else. I am assuming it is a mistress that is writing this poem of longing for him.
You cannot expect me to
read your mind
while
I am losing mine.
This suggest to me that he made promises he is not going to keep.
Well written Mary
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
Comment from Mastery
Very nice indeed, uptowngirl. I like the heart displayed in your words from start to finish. It sounds so sincere.
"send me long...lovely....letters
each one drafted to remind me
that you still care
that you are thinking about me
that there is still a place
in your heart that remains of
your need for us"
Bravo! Bob (Mastery)
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Very nice indeed, uptowngirl. I like the heart displayed in your words from start to finish. It sounds so sincere.
"send me long...lovely....letters
each one drafted to remind me
that you still care
that you are thinking about me
that there is still a place
in your heart that remains of
your need for us"
Bravo! Bob (Mastery)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from Glasstruth
Missing someone, and doubting if that someone loves you is written quite spontaneously with excellent alliteration throughout. Like the structure of your lines. Well thought out. Thanks for sharing. Les
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Missing someone, and doubting if that someone loves you is written quite spontaneously with excellent alliteration throughout. Like the structure of your lines. Well thought out. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from onkughosh19
GReat write on the feelings of a courtesan....she too, after all,is a human being and is enraged by the fact that since his daparture he has't written a single letter too show her that he cares for her.THis is a poem that tells of the anguish these girls have in their seeminly fulfilled lives.
A touching write bautifuly penned.
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GReat write on the feelings of a courtesan....she too, after all,is a human being and is enraged by the fact that since his daparture he has't written a single letter too show her that he cares for her.THis is a poem that tells of the anguish these girls have in their seeminly fulfilled lives.
A touching write bautifuly penned.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
