Chocolate Fudge Kayak
A bit of nonsense with a moral4 total reviews
Comment from Jose Saic
It is a story that has has a very good sense of humor of a person that disguised as a nun and built aa kayak out of chocolate fudge cake and held it together with drinking straws to show a friend the posibilty to enter in USA without papers.
Whe he was near NY the intense cold provoked an idea that destroy ed the Kayak because he mad a fire in the boat and thethe chocolate melted and the Kayak quickly sank.
The good humour sense of the story completes it.
Congratulations.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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It is a story that has has a very good sense of humor of a person that disguised as a nun and built aa kayak out of chocolate fudge cake and held it together with drinking straws to show a friend the posibilty to enter in USA without papers.
Whe he was near NY the intense cold provoked an idea that destroy ed the Kayak because he mad a fire in the boat and thethe chocolate melted and the Kayak quickly sank.
The good humour sense of the story completes it.
Congratulations.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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This started as a joke when an author asked for a suggestion on how one might enter the USA illegally - so glad you liked it.
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You are welcome
Comment from SHIRLEY LEE
You have a great sense of humor. However, I only gave you four stars because I wanted more and you didn't give it to me. Sorry, Shirl
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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You have a great sense of humor. However, I only gave you four stars because I wanted more and you didn't give it to me. Sorry, Shirl
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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No worries Shirley Lee
Four is better than three
Its enough and pleases me
But I must go now for you see
There's chocolate fudge cake
for our tea,
Comment from Samuel Dickens
Hee-haw! Well, I think you pretty much know what kind of humor you've produced here. Completely silly and ridiculous, but I like it. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Hee-haw! Well, I think you pretty much know what kind of humor you've produced here. Completely silly and ridiculous, but I like it. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Glad you enjoyed it, Samuel. Sometimes it does even writers of serious crime novels good to get the silliness out of their system. Thanks for the excellent review.
Comment from RodG
This was a cute story that might be rewritten for young readers, especially if you could find someone to illustrate it. I can almost see the nun in the kayak paddling into New York City's harbor on a melting kayak.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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This was a cute story that might be rewritten for young readers, especially if you could find someone to illustrate it. I can almost see the nun in the kayak paddling into New York City's harbor on a melting kayak.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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That's an interesting thought. I write for children under a different name and wish I could split my FanStory membership into two.
