A Soldier of Christ
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Comment from Frank Jauregui
I enjoyed your poem of "Two Kingdoms". Most people, even some Christians, don't realize that we are all in a spiritual war involving two kingdoms. One war is fought externally by powers unseen, and the other is fought internally, between the flesh and the spirit - once we receive Christ as our Lord.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed your poem of "Two Kingdoms". Most people, even some Christians, don't realize that we are all in a spiritual war involving two kingdoms. One war is fought externally by powers unseen, and the other is fought internally, between the flesh and the spirit - once we receive Christ as our Lord.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Too true my friend much appreciate the input thank you ...
Comment from Ricky1024
"Two Kingdoms"
Nicely crafted in Solid Gold ink.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly..
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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"Two Kingdoms"
Nicely crafted in Solid Gold ink.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly..
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Excellent when you need good advice ask a doctor Ive been missing a few appointments due to my reorganisation but hope to be back on your list again thanks Ricky.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Two Kingdoms is a nice contest entry for the poem of the month. You set out to explain very nicely for us that there are two forces at work in this world, one force for good championed by God and the other is a force for evil champion by Satan.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Two Kingdoms is a nice contest entry for the poem of the month. You set out to explain very nicely for us that there are two forces at work in this world, one force for good championed by God and the other is a force for evil champion by Satan.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Well thats the way I see it truly it was a poem of the month entry but alas it got piped to the post probably by someones beautiful animal poetry arent they hard to beat ...
Comment from NicciFaye
I find this poem exceptional in content, message, thought and journey. I am sad to say this is the first time am reading your works. This has so much wisdom and spiritual truths in it, most of which may read such a strong piece like this and get lost.
I find the picture to be interesting as I've never seen anything like this in one structure but pretty familiar with some of its content. I don't have a six to bestow upon a deep dive write, but you have my attention.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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I find this poem exceptional in content, message, thought and journey. I am sad to say this is the first time am reading your works. This has so much wisdom and spiritual truths in it, most of which may read such a strong piece like this and get lost.
I find the picture to be interesting as I've never seen anything like this in one structure but pretty familiar with some of its content. I don't have a six to bestow upon a deep dive write, but you have my attention.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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... anytime and much appreciate the read. There are more spiritual writings aand you can peruse at your leisure by looking through my portfolio.
Comment from Kingsrookviii
This is so good, so deep and I am too tired to adequately digest this. I am going to book mark this for further review, but it is very though provoking and deep. This is, upon, initial reading a true work of art - great poetry. I think:
He would willingly give a life for his cause; that
Is why he seeks the lost
Is especially fantastic and true. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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This is so good, so deep and I am too tired to adequately digest this. I am going to book mark this for further review, but it is very though provoking and deep. This is, upon, initial reading a true work of art - great poetry. I think:
He would willingly give a life for his cause; that
Is why he seeks the lost
Is especially fantastic and true. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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many thanks and i hope you will give it a closer read for your inspection.
Comment from SteveY
A nicely written poem outlining some of the techniques and strategies of the darker forces. Good information presented in poetic form.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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A nicely written poem outlining some of the techniques and strategies of the darker forces. Good information presented in poetic form.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thank you steveY much appreciate the time for your review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good job! Your poem is well written and contains Bible truths, not just your own thoughts. It's sad that so many close their eyes to the ongoing "war" between Christ and Satan.
That weapon that breaks the chains of the devils (devil's) grip.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Good job! Your poem is well written and contains Bible truths, not just your own thoughts. It's sad that so many close their eyes to the ongoing "war" between Christ and Satan.
That weapon that breaks the chains of the devils (devil's) grip.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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... point noted and I will ammend thanks mumsyone ...
Comment from Amsterdam
Let there be light
It will soak to the ground.
Yes now begins the fight
So much hate goes around.
Don't be so contrite
Some much work to be done
Better shine that light bright
With the power of the son.
someone's....awake.
;)
Am
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Let there be light
It will soak to the ground.
Yes now begins the fight
So much hate goes around.
Don't be so contrite
Some much work to be done
Better shine that light bright
With the power of the son.
someone's....awake.
;)
Am
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Much appreciate Am. ... thank you.
Comment from amada
This is a very well written work in a very difficult subject. However, you caught the line to catch the interest of this reader. Mesmerizing account.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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This is a very well written work in a very difficult subject. However, you caught the line to catch the interest of this reader. Mesmerizing account.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Many thankyous and appreciate your time to read it ... !
Comment from Saucey
Well written piece with great insight. A different spin and I love the style. Those of us in a relationship with Jesus Christ knows the deal. This is Brilliant. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Well written piece with great insight. A different spin and I love the style. Those of us in a relationship with Jesus Christ knows the deal. This is Brilliant. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thanks Saucey much appreciate ... glad you could enjoy !
