Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "The Warrior's Creed"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
10 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
It takes a special person to be a warrior.
On December 1st 2006 over 13 years ago.
I wound up in the hospital if trying to commit suicide with a hundred middle stitches.
There was a young guy at the launch the one day I think he was a gang banger.
He saw the stitches especially the ones in my neck.
That's when he called me a warrior.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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It takes a special person to be a warrior.
On December 1st 2006 over 13 years ago.
I wound up in the hospital if trying to commit suicide with a hundred middle stitches.
There was a young guy at the launch the one day I think he was a gang banger.
He saw the stitches especially the ones in my neck.
That's when he called me a warrior.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thank you Ricky for your fabulous review, I really appreciate your input and the wonderful testimony you shared. Glory to God. your reviews are a very precious treasure to me.
Gb
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is well-written, moving, and uplifting--encouraging the young
to stay strong and steady, like soldiers. The part that stands out the most to me is about emotions--not letting them completely rule decisions.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Your poem is well-written, moving, and uplifting--encouraging the young
to stay strong and steady, like soldiers. The part that stands out the most to me is about emotions--not letting them completely rule decisions.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and uplifting review. I really appreciate it and value your input.
Comment from royowen
I like a battle hymn, decidedly different from the norm. I have no idea about whom this superb work is addressed, but this would be toward one's child or some such, would be my guess. Beautifully written, with those lovely nuanced lyrical overtones. A nice even rhythm to it, with no definite meter and you classic aabb rhyme, well dine, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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I like a battle hymn, decidedly different from the norm. I have no idea about whom this superb work is addressed, but this would be toward one's child or some such, would be my guess. Beautifully written, with those lovely nuanced lyrical overtones. A nice even rhythm to it, with no definite meter and you classic aabb rhyme, well dine, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Dear Roy,
Thank you so much for your encouraging review and for your good input. I was working with young people and I received this and I saw the need for them to take a stand in their lives.
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Well done
Comment from Janetsue
Even with good intentions, it is so easy to stumble. This is a positive posting with a strong message to look upward into the light and listen to the Spirit's guidance deep withing our souls. A golden shore awaits....
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Even with good intentions, it is so easy to stumble. This is a positive posting with a strong message to look upward into the light and listen to the Spirit's guidance deep withing our souls. A golden shore awaits....
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, I really appreciate your input and you fine thoughts on the poem.
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You're very welcome!!
Comment from JLR
Dear Poet from the North, I always enjoy the pause that I take to consume your words and let them tumble in my thoughts. Thank you for your continued contributions to this student if the written word. Write on and write often.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Dear Poet from the North, I always enjoy the pause that I take to consume your words and let them tumble in my thoughts. Thank you for your continued contributions to this student if the written word. Write on and write often.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your encouragement. I like your term, "Poet from the North". Perhaps I should adopt it! Thanks for your encouragement to keep writing, as it can be a challenge sometimes just to apply myself.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiments here, the warrior who has a blue print of bravery, if your lines had a united syllable count it would improve the flow, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed the sentiments here, the warrior who has a blue print of bravery, if your lines had a united syllable count it would improve the flow, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you Dolly for your review and input about my poem. It is highly appreciated.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
a fine spiritual poem that encompasses elements of faith in it. Good scheme and the rhymes are well done. The poem flow very well.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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a fine spiritual poem that encompasses elements of faith in it. Good scheme and the rhymes are well done. The poem flow very well.
ola thomas
Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to read and reflect on my poems, I really appreciate it and helps me tp go forward in writing.
Comment from Nosha17
I like Norse legends and tales, I know that Icelandic is still very much like the old Norse-I studied languages and the history of language at University-it fascinates me. I studies Old and Middle High German, I loved it. I like your call to have spirit to the warrior-good lesson in life for all of us. Excellent rhyming-one thing, passed is a very, you need preposition -past the stars. Most enjoyable. faye
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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I like Norse legends and tales, I know that Icelandic is still very much like the old Norse-I studied languages and the history of language at University-it fascinates me. I studies Old and Middle High German, I loved it. I like your call to have spirit to the warrior-good lesson in life for all of us. Excellent rhyming-one thing, passed is a very, you need preposition -past the stars. Most enjoyable. faye
Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you for reading and reflecting on my poem, it was also very nice to read what you said about your study on languages.
Comment from KnightsFyreByrd
Catching hold of the imagination right away
Uplifting to the mind
Motivational to bot just those entering into who they could be but also those coming out of a blue/sadness funk.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Catching hold of the imagination right away
Uplifting to the mind
Motivational to bot just those entering into who they could be but also those coming out of a blue/sadness funk.
Thank you.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you for your comments on my poem and for taking the time to read and reflect on it. I really appreciate your honesty. With kindness, Gb
Comment from rspoet
This is a very nice poem of the Warrior's Creed
Told in a rhymed poem of quatrains
Separated by a very good couplet
Dreams set passed the stars
with a future of endless possibilities
Groomed to be the light
Standing strong in the spirit
But the journey is yet to be taken
and the future is always untold
This poem reads very well
Excellent
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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This is a very nice poem of the Warrior's Creed
Told in a rhymed poem of quatrains
Separated by a very good couplet
Dreams set passed the stars
with a future of endless possibilities
Groomed to be the light
Standing strong in the spirit
But the journey is yet to be taken
and the future is always untold
This poem reads very well
Excellent
Comment Written 01-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you for reading and reflecting on my poem, it really was a great review and I appreciate it very much. With kindness, Gb
