Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Hey there Ine


words hurt more than deeds
don't damage one with either
keep peace everywhere

These are powerful words you have penned. Once spoken, angry words can NEVER be taken back
Bear

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013

Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is a great short poem with a very good message be kind to one another keep the peace well done my friend regards Jill

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

True. Once you've said something. It can't be taken back. The memory holds that hurt hostage, and eventually its ugly head reappears. A nice little reminder on that we should all watch what we do, or say. Thanks for sharing. Les

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

This is a fine message to send in a 5/7/5 poem. It is clear and comes right to the point. We should be kind to each other and promote neighborly friendship and peace..

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine

Comment from beccabootie123

Excellent

this is so true, you have wisdom and a verbal ability that makes me look forward to the writings you send out each day.
thank you for sharing this write today I needed it. adele

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Yes, my mother used to say if you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all! Thank you for reminding us in this 5-7-5 that words are powerful weapons. You even included alliteration. Peace! -Joan

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine

Comment from Deborah Marie

Exceptional

Lovely 5-7-5 poem with three syllables everywhere. Lovely photo too! Peace would, indeed, be wonderful if found everywhere. I agree, Deb

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine. Thanks for this lovely six, you made my day.

Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel

Excellent

I skipped right over "everywhere" without missing a beat. But then your author notes compelled me to check syllable count myself cuz it SEEMS like maybe there could be a forth syllable in there...of course you were right all along.

The strength of this 5-7-5 transcends form. You are so correct... people need to be aware that words can cause hurt... intentionally or simply trough carelessness. Thank you for reminding us.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine

Comment from elgone

Exceptional

People cling to old ways and those thoughts are what cause conflict between people and groups of people. For there to ever be peace people must thing differently about what is important to them as individuals. They cannot allow their governments to rule them.

E

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Sunday, Ine. Thanks for this lovely six, you made my day!!

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

Words hurt more than deeds sometimes, but I don't know if I'd rather someone hit me on the head with a stick.

Best to keep the peace.

Cheers, DW

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine.