Little Poems
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Comment from Angel Debbie
Short and to the point.
Life will bloom
And carry its seeds
Where wind blows
New life will grow
Great strong words generate life from a seed Nice write. Beautiful picture by author.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Short and to the point.
Life will bloom
And carry its seeds
Where wind blows
New life will grow
Great strong words generate life from a seed Nice write. Beautiful picture by author.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you Angel Debbie.
Comment from ravenblack
Very simply put
And very true
As Alan Watts would say,
Everything
Tends towards life.
Just sometimes wish weeds and mosquitos
were not so prolific.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Very simply put
And very true
As Alan Watts would say,
Everything
Tends towards life.
Just sometimes wish weeds and mosquitos
were not so prolific.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks Ravenblack. It is hard to appreciate some more than others.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is really good, Treischel, I don't write these little ones because I find them difficult to make sense. When I have tried it, I fail abysmally. This one not only made sense, it rhymed too! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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This is really good, Treischel, I don't write these little ones because I find them difficult to make sense. When I have tried it, I fail abysmally. This one not only made sense, it rhymed too! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you Sandra. Glad that it did.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Tom.
Lovely work to read this morning as it's raining at the cottage. Back to nature and all it gives. Life always creates the ability to seed and grow thus continuing life itself.
Loved this one :) Well penned my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Hi Tom.
Lovely work to read this morning as it's raining at the cottage. Back to nature and all it gives. Life always creates the ability to seed and grow thus continuing life itself.
Loved this one :) Well penned my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you Maureen. Refreshing rain, rejuvenates the Earth and freshens the air. We had rain and hail here last night.
Comment from CornishChick
Awww...Tom. You touch me so much! Please take a moment to read my latest posting: Spreading Branches. This poem would work perfectly w/ it and also the one you submitted recently about death. Blessings to you! You touch my heart and I am glad I carried you to Germany w/ me via FanStory!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Awww...Tom. You touch me so much! Please take a moment to read my latest posting: Spreading Branches. This poem would work perfectly w/ it and also the one you submitted recently about death. Blessings to you! You touch my heart and I am glad I carried you to Germany w/ me via FanStory!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you ashowalter, I'll do that.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent poem that meets the stated requirements of a septolet. It forms two complete thoughts which support each other. It paints a picture of a one of nature strategies of spreading life.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent poem that meets the stated requirements of a septolet. It forms two complete thoughts which support each other. It paints a picture of a one of nature strategies of spreading life.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks Preston, you succinctly summarized it.
Comment from sunnilicious
I have heard that a million times and always a different way. This septolet came out well. Nicely done. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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I have heard that a million times and always a different way. This septolet came out well. Nicely done. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
NICE WORDS THAT THE PICTURE COMPLIMENTS AS WELL MANY TIMES I REMEMBER WELL BLOWING THOSE PODS IN THE AIR AND WATCHING THEM FALL IN THE MOST UNUSUAL PLACES
tk
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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NICE WORDS THAT THE PICTURE COMPLIMENTS AS WELL MANY TIMES I REMEMBER WELL BLOWING THOSE PODS IN THE AIR AND WATCHING THEM FALL IN THE MOST UNUSUAL PLACES
tk
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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Thank you TK I can visualize that.
Comment from zanya
A fundamental truth and perhaps a metaphorical truth also. Nature is her own boss and blooms where and when she wills, despite human kind's efforts to overpower Nature.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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A fundamental truth and perhaps a metaphorical truth also. Nature is her own boss and blooms where and when she wills, despite human kind's efforts to overpower Nature.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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Thank you zanya. Great insights.
Comment from ennahanid
I enjoyed reading your Septolet and your notes that explained the form. Your picture and color choice compliment your words very well and it was a pleasure to read you this afternoon - Dinah
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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I enjoyed reading your Septolet and your notes that explained the form. Your picture and color choice compliment your words very well and it was a pleasure to read you this afternoon - Dinah
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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Thank you Dinah
