Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "Hear Ye!"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from Joan E.
I am glad you created another Exhortation--I really like the form and enjoyed created my interpretation. I am pleased that you too joined in the celebration of the royal birth. I think the world craves positive news! I enjoyed your rhymes and alliteration, plus the way you wove in the Prince's name. More cheers from Colorado- Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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I am glad you created another Exhortation--I really like the form and enjoyed created my interpretation. I am pleased that you too joined in the celebration of the royal birth. I think the world craves positive news! I enjoyed your rhymes and alliteration, plus the way you wove in the Prince's name. More cheers from Colorado- Joan
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Thank you Joan. hear, hear!
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Treischel,
What a wonderful tribute to the new prince. I like the title and the great announcement. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Aloha Treischel,
What a wonderful tribute to the new prince. I like the title and the great announcement. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Thank you Ginger.
Comment from sunnilicious
The colors are an eye soar. But that is a wonderful poem to commemorate the royal couple. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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The colors are an eye soar. But that is a wonderful poem to commemorate the royal couple. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Excellent work.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sunnilicious.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Another of your adventurous forms. Greatly enjoyed and the subject so
timely. Good beat in rhythm and rhyme. Well written and a joy to read. Smiles, Robin :)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Another of your adventurous forms. Greatly enjoyed and the subject so
timely. Good beat in rhythm and rhyme. Well written and a joy to read. Smiles, Robin :)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you Robin, thought I'd spread the word - if you haven't heard a thousand times already.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Let all of London's church bells ring,
Colonies raise your voice and sing,
To the newest George, a future king ....
:) :)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Let all of London's church bells ring,
Colonies raise your voice and sing,
To the newest George, a future king ....
:) :)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sonali, I think.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Excellent poem. So you have joined the ranks of the ROYA'L
groupies A supposed REPUBLICAN . Off with their heads!
Seeing as how George III screwed up so badly I would not think that George was very auspicious name.
Just spoofing you. My guru is a king.
Preston
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Excellent poem. So you have joined the ranks of the ROYA'L
groupies A supposed REPUBLICAN . Off with their heads!
Seeing as how George III screwed up so badly I would not think that George was very auspicious name.
Just spoofing you. My guru is a king.
Preston
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you Preston. Just reporting the news. Thought I'd give the Brits equal share, since I wrote so much about the 4th of July. Same thoughts I had about the name.
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-penned dedication as a new babe blesses the earth as he fills the world with joy;
Both writing and birth parallel the story of the arrival of the Christ child.
Good audio imagery--I so like "church bells ring!".
They have named him George Alexander--I would have preferred Alexander George myself!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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A well-penned dedication as a new babe blesses the earth as he fills the world with joy;
Both writing and birth parallel the story of the arrival of the Christ child.
Good audio imagery--I so like "church bells ring!".
They have named him George Alexander--I would have preferred Alexander George myself!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you Margaret. Oh well, maybe another King George.
Comment from in777wr#
A very good celebratory poem. The poem flows well. When news come out of England, that is the way it normally is. I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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A very good celebratory poem. The poem flows well. When news come out of England, that is the way it normally is. I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you in777wr#.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Another good one here, Mr. 'T', proclaiming the birth of the future King of England. King George the, what, seventeenth? Well, maybe not THAT high, but it's up there...
Good work!
As regal Prince and Princess [Planed] Planned---->Planed, as in airplane? Or, planned, as in, "he planned the whole thing?"
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Another good one here, Mr. 'T', proclaiming the birth of the future King of England. King George the, what, seventeenth? Well, maybe not THAT high, but it's up there...
Good work!
As regal Prince and Princess [Planed] Planned---->Planed, as in airplane? Or, planned, as in, "he planned the whole thing?"
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you Dean, I'll add another N.
Comment from Redwing
Yes, it is great news and well written about the new babe. We have all been waiting for this guy and he finally showed. Such excitement for the young couple and the Queen too.
Great poem
Betty
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Yes, it is great news and well written about the new babe. We have all been waiting for this guy and he finally showed. Such excitement for the young couple and the Queen too.
Great poem
Betty
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, Betty.
