Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Weekends"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from robina1978
Cute an sweet picture to complement this poem. You describe the weekend here in a most beautiful way. Dot on syllable count as well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013
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Cute an sweet picture to complement this poem. You describe the weekend here in a most beautiful way. Dot on syllable count as well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013
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Thank you Ine.
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welcome, Ine
Comment from sunnilicious
Cute artwork. Where's Friday night?
This may have to become a 5/7/5/7/7. I thought a majority of people cleaned and dated on Saturday. But I like your style. Hope you had a great weekend.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013
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Cute artwork. Where's Friday night?
This may have to become a 5/7/5/7/7. I thought a majority of people cleaned and dated on Saturday. But I like your style. Hope you had a great weekend.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. You have sprinkled me with dazzling starlight! Yes, I had a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent 5-7-5 verse that meets the line/syllable requirements of the form. The relationship among title and lines is apparent. It sets the mood for a good weekend. I enjoyed this poem.
Preston
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent 5-7-5 verse that meets the line/syllable requirements of the form. The relationship among title and lines is apparent. It sets the mood for a good weekend. I enjoyed this poem.
Preston
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thank you Preston. Hope you had a good one.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
I must be doing something wrong Sat are hectic sundays I have to cook I like mondays I think they are divine no honey do's this honey do that can't wait til that alarm goes off monday morn heheh OF course you know I'm just kidding but I HAD TO FILL IN THE SPACES OR THEY ALWAYS SAY YOU DID NOT SAY ENOUGH FOR A PROPER REVIEW HEHEHE
TK
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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I must be doing something wrong Sat are hectic sundays I have to cook I like mondays I think they are divine no honey do's this honey do that can't wait til that alarm goes off monday morn heheh OF course you know I'm just kidding but I HAD TO FILL IN THE SPACES OR THEY ALWAYS SAY YOU DID NOT SAY ENOUGH FOR A PROPER REVIEW HEHEHE
TK
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sir T. I know that of which you speak. Especially when your review is required to be 3 times longer than the poem.
Comment from Capricorn30
I so admire this adorable photo, Tom! Too cute!
A well-penned poem as indeed the languid hours of Saturday and holy Sunday mornings create weekend pleasures.
I so like the alliterative conclusion. I am an alliteration fanatic--I love commenting on its appearance!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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I so admire this adorable photo, Tom! Too cute!
A well-penned poem as indeed the languid hours of Saturday and holy Sunday mornings create weekend pleasures.
I so like the alliterative conclusion. I am an alliteration fanatic--I love commenting on its appearance!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thanks Margaret, I'm an alliterative fool sometimes.
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LOL!
And I enjoy it!
Have a great summer evening:)
Comment from Joan E.
Yes, this weekend for me was one of relaxation--unusual and appreciated! Thank you for reminding me to not take it for granted. I enjoyed your use of alliteration in this 5-7-5 as well. Happy beginning of a new week- Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Yes, this weekend for me was one of relaxation--unusual and appreciated! Thank you for reminding me to not take it for granted. I enjoyed your use of alliteration in this 5-7-5 as well. Happy beginning of a new week- Joan
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thank you Joan, I will enjoy it.
Comment from Eigle Rull
I love the picture you chose for this piece. It is so cute. Like before, you chose your subject, and homed in on it with short, but perfect thoughts. I enjoyed reading it. It was excellent in my opinion.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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I love the picture you chose for this piece. It is so cute. Like before, you chose your subject, and homed in on it with short, but perfect thoughts. I enjoyed reading it. It was excellent in my opinion.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thank you Eigle. Just something simple.
Comment from Sapphire33
Well hey now I like verses with little words and if you do it right, they are more meaningful then standard format, thanks for sharing this and bringing light to my day.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Well hey now I like verses with little words and if you do it right, they are more meaningful then standard format, thanks for sharing this and bringing light to my day.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sapphire I always aim to please.
Comment from CornishChick
How can one person say so much with so little? I played hooky from church this morning because its raining, has been raining and will continue to rain, here in the erstwhile sunny low country of Georgia! You brought sunshine into my morning with your 5/7/5... I AM studying your formats!!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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How can one person say so much with so little? I played hooky from church this morning because its raining, has been raining and will continue to rain, here in the erstwhile sunny low country of Georgia! You brought sunshine into my morning with your 5/7/5... I AM studying your formats!!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Well thank you Arlene. Glad to hear it.
