Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Summer Camp"Small and Specialty Poems
6 total reviews
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Good morning, Treischel,
"Summer Camp" is an excellent entertaining poem with an unusual form. The rhyme following a consistent pattern gives it good rhythm and flow. I am glad the parents are happy. I am sure the kids are. I enjoyed this read.
Preston
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Good morning, Treischel,
"Summer Camp" is an excellent entertaining poem with an unusual form. The rhyme following a consistent pattern gives it good rhythm and flow. I am glad the parents are happy. I am sure the kids are. I enjoyed this read.
Preston
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you Preston. A win/win scenario.
Comment from Gungalo
Sunny day,
Kids away,
Hit the hay,
Parents play.
A Trequas Poem eh? Quite the write here and one which I wouldn't dare mess with. Hehehe.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Sunny day,
Kids away,
Hit the hay,
Parents play.
A Trequas Poem eh? Quite the write here and one which I wouldn't dare mess with. Hehehe.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thanks Gungalo. Yup, I thing it stands for 3 syllable quatrains (three - qua). Blame it on Ritchie :-))
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Nope.
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
Once again, you have been the first to introduce me to an intriguing new form of poetry! I really like this form, and the poem reads beautifully. It is a very timely subject as well!
~Gypsy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Once again, you have been the first to introduce me to an intriguing new form of poetry! I really like this form, and the poem reads beautifully. It is a very timely subject as well!
~Gypsy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thank you Gypsy. My grandSon just got back from a week of camp. That was my muse.
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Oh, the mischief and trouble that I used to get into at camp! I should write something about it.... but will I overcome my self criticism of my writing and post it?
Hopefully I will be able to afford a SPAG class soon so I'm not so self-conscious about posting.
In the meantime, you have provided me much inspiration to exercise my pen and practice! Thanks again!
Comment from Dean Kuch
I love this style, Mr. T! It's really got a nice, upbeat kind of, 'pop-pop-pop' rhythm to it.
Your choice of rhymes was spot-on for a poem about this subject matter. Keeps that jazzy rhythm bouncin' right along!
Great stuff!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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I love this style, Mr. T! It's really got a nice, upbeat kind of, 'pop-pop-pop' rhythm to it.
Your choice of rhymes was spot-on for a poem about this subject matter. Keeps that jazzy rhythm bouncin' right along!
Great stuff!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thank you Dean. This is my second one.I really like the simplicity and quick expressive tempo.
Comment from Capricorn30
Yet another poem I must attempt, Tom!
A well-written poem emphasizing the summer event many children (and parents) look forward to;
Spot-on rhyme makes for a fun read.
Excellent!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Yet another poem I must attempt, Tom!
A well-written poem emphasizing the summer event many children (and parents) look forward to;
Spot-on rhyme makes for a fun read.
Excellent!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thank you Capricorn. Glad you liked it. Be my guest!
Comment from Callyope
Now this one is a real treat! It's so fun and playful it instantly, and without warning, lifts the spirit. It truly offers a tiny and unexpected glimpse of carefree childhood. Well done and well written, I loved it!!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Now this one is a real treat! It's so fun and playful it instantly, and without warning, lifts the spirit. It truly offers a tiny and unexpected glimpse of carefree childhood. Well done and well written, I loved it!!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thank you Callyope. Your reaction has got me smiling!
