Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Pet Parade"Small and Specialty Poems
6 total reviews
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is excellent 5A poetry. It meets the line/syllable, alliteration requirement. It has good imagery. The picture illustrated the poem. I enjoyed the poem but did not find it as interesting as your nature poems. Personal preference I guess.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is excellent 5A poetry. It meets the line/syllable, alliteration requirement. It has good imagery. The picture illustrated the poem. I enjoyed the poem but did not find it as interesting as your nature poems. Personal preference I guess.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Thanks Preston. I know what you mean.
Comment from Sararb
Love this one! I used to have a white poodle just like this one. He was so smart. He could walk on his hind legs and dance around, jump through hoops. My son trained him well. Still miss him. He was such a sweet pet. I loved the style of your poem. Hugs, Sara :)
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Love this one! I used to have a white poodle just like this one. He was so smart. He could walk on his hind legs and dance around, jump through hoops. My son trained him well. Still miss him. He was such a sweet pet. I loved the style of your poem. Hugs, Sara :)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Thank you Dara, quite a coincidence that I found that picture. Mypaybe you should write about him!
Comment from Selina Stambi
Easy to read, easy on the eye, easy to hand out well deserved stars.
Lovely alliteration ... as always! :)
p.s. Can't keep up with reviewing, most prolific poet!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Easy to read, easy on the eye, easy to hand out well deserved stars.
Lovely alliteration ... as always! :)
p.s. Can't keep up with reviewing, most prolific poet!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Thank you Sonali. Well I didn't write a single piem yesterday. I must be slipping.
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Hurrah ... for the reviewing fans, that is ... :)
Comment from DRG24
I really love this awesome poem and I thank you for the dedicarion to my form!!! How many 5A s is this for you???? Sorry for typos it's a small screen
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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I really love this awesome poem and I thank you for the dedicarion to my form!!! How many 5A s is this for you???? Sorry for typos it's a small screen
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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thank you DRG24. That makes 6.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this 5 a poem about the dainty dogs dancing around in the pet parade. i enjoyed reading this one..
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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this is very well written, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this 5 a poem about the dainty dogs dancing around in the pet parade. i enjoyed reading this one..
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Thanks sweetwoodjax.
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-written canine poem as dogs can indeed prance about in fashionable attire also;
"dance daintily"--I believe the four-legged friends have no other option but to move about gracefully!
The photograph is delightful!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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A well-written canine poem as dogs can indeed prance about in fashionable attire also;
"dance daintily"--I believe the four-legged friends have no other option but to move about gracefully!
The photograph is delightful!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
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Thank you Capricorn.
