My child in the blast
A dad whose child has become a victim of a terrorist attack.2 total reviews
Comment from SteveY
Oh, how awful for you. I hope that this wasn't your real experience. But regardless it is someone's experience and for them or you I will pray. Excellent job!
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Oh, how awful for you. I hope that this wasn't your real experience. But regardless it is someone's experience and for them or you I will pray. Excellent job!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2013
Comment from Zue65
The author speaks of a sad event in the life of the victims of a crazy bomb blast where many innocent lives were wasted, and the parents in denial, and cannot accept that their kids were gone. The lines in the two stanzas reflect this message, though the rhythm suffers a bit, and needs tweaking, the message compensated for it. If this is a 5-7-5 syllabic count, it may need a little editing. I like the message however.
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The author speaks of a sad event in the life of the victims of a crazy bomb blast where many innocent lives were wasted, and the parents in denial, and cannot accept that their kids were gone. The lines in the two stanzas reflect this message, though the rhythm suffers a bit, and needs tweaking, the message compensated for it. If this is a 5-7-5 syllabic count, it may need a little editing. I like the message however.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2013
