Waves & Sandcastles
Transiency of both material & abstract2 total reviews
Comment from Nuad1
Very nice. Haiku one of my fave forms because it gives such good image(s) of a natural scene. I clearly pictured this while reading your work: nice.
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Very nice. Haiku one of my fave forms because it gives such good image(s) of a natural scene. I clearly pictured this while reading your work: nice.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable is correct as the words help the reader visualize what's written. No photo is needed because the words cover it all. Good job.
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This piece meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable is correct as the words help the reader visualize what's written. No photo is needed because the words cover it all. Good job.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
