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Granddad's Treasure

Short story to make you say Ah

2 total reviews 
Comment from Randomlyabstract
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The ending is just so cute! I so loved this story and was hooked with suspense from start to end, waiting and waiting what the Grand dad's treasure was! The ending seemed such a great idea! You should get your story published somewhere. :)
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 26-May-2013


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
    Thanks for the suggestion regarding publication - I write various novels but usually in the serious adult crime genre. What I might do sometime in the future is publish these family friendly stories under a different name. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Gungalo
Excellent
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This was very good and culminated in a great way. For those of you about to say no it didn't, I say go back and read again. It's wonderful.

 Comment Written 26-May-2013


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
    Thank you for these precious 5 stars. As far as I know, no one accepted your challenge, in fact, most seem to have finished the story and said "Ah"
reply by Gungalo on 12-Jun-2013
    Smile.