The ending is just so cute! I so loved this story and was hooked with suspense from start to end, waiting and waiting what the Grand dad's treasure was! The ending seemed such a great idea! You should get your story published somewhere. :)
Comment Written 26-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
Thanks for the suggestion regarding publication - I write various novels but usually in the serious adult crime genre. What I might do sometime in the future is publish these family friendly stories under a different name. Thanks for the review.