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Timeless

A Romantic Acrostic

8 total reviews 
Comment from Dean Kuch
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The love bug's bite has that mystical, magical effect on us all, does it not? Lust lures us into the snare, and love is the intricate webbing that encases and ensnares us. I, for one, wouldn't have it any other way.

This was beautiful, and quite elegantly presented. I especially liked the seventh line in the poem, "Sinuous heart strings drawn by lust..."

Very powerful!

 Comment Written 17-May-2013

reply by the author on 17-May-2013
    Thank you for this most thoughtful and detailed review, Dean.
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
    Thank you for this most thoughtful and detailed review, Dean.
Comment from Sararb
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A beautifully written poem but for this type of poetry it would be better not to center it. I love the words and the flow, but it would show up much better if it wasn't centered. Good luuck in the contest. Sararb

 Comment Written 17-May-2013

reply by the author on 17-May-2013
    Thank you, Sararb.
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
    Thank you, Sararb.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Yes, love is timeless. It has always existed; it always will. I like the rhyme and meter of this poem and the effective expression of the theme.

 Comment Written 16-May-2013

reply by the author on 16-May-2013
    Thank you for the kind review, Janice.
Comment from Solitude Poet
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Very nice Romantic acrostic poetry!
Hope it reaches more audience and you get positive feedback!
All the best in the contest!

 Comment Written 16-May-2013

reply by the author on 16-May-2013
    Thank you for a wonderful review, SP. :)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written my friend so much feeling weaved through the lines very beautiful indeed I enjoyed good luck my friend regards Jill

 Comment Written 16-May-2013

reply by the author on 16-May-2013
    Thank you, Jill.
Comment from Curly Girly
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This is a lovely poem, which spells out the word: Timeless. Wonderful and romantic choice fof beautiful, rich words. You chose a great image to match.

 Comment Written 16-May-2013

reply by the author on 16-May-2013
    Thank you for having the image available and for the lovely review.
Comment from Alexander E Poet
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interesting, on love well said and great flow I thought very descriptive I think it makes the requirements vivid and good energy I thought this was a and a good piece of poetry and very well done very authentic. There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander Q*Q

 Comment Written 16-May-2013

reply by the author on 16-May-2013
    Thank you so much for this kind review, Alexander.
Comment from anydamaru
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A very well written acrostic+ a neat picture. Good rhyming also...not to mention that the overall idea was brought out quite nicely)

Alex)

 Comment Written 16-May-2013

reply by the author on 16-May-2013
    Thank you, Alex.