Little Poems
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7 total reviews
Comment from Robin Gilmor
A beautiful Triolet Poem on a a very appropriate subject. Your flow is smooth
and your choice of words soft and gentile to present your meaning.
Well written and lovingly presented, Smiles. Robin :)
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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A beautiful Triolet Poem on a a very appropriate subject. Your flow is smooth
and your choice of words soft and gentile to present your meaning.
Well written and lovingly presented, Smiles. Robin :)
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Thanks Robin. Glad you liked it. That was the feeling I wanted to project.
Comment from mrsmajor
Very nice Triolet poem, in honor of all mothers..(I like that)..well chosen words, to made this a pleasure..
The picture was cute, it gave the poem a nice touch..
Thanks for sharing this with us, and for the Mother's day
wish....
Hugs,
Victoria
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Very nice Triolet poem, in honor of all mothers..(I like that)..well chosen words, to made this a pleasure..
The picture was cute, it gave the poem a nice touch..
Thanks for sharing this with us, and for the Mother's day
wish....
Hugs,
Victoria
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Thank you Victoria. I consider all mothers special.
You are most welcome, your poem was a joY!
Comment from Sararb
Thank you for the beautiful warm and thoughtful tribute to all mothers. I can tell by your poetry that you are a kind and caring man, with a big heart! Hugs, Sara :)
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thank you for the beautiful warm and thoughtful tribute to all mothers. I can tell by your poetry that you are a kind and caring man, with a big heart! Hugs, Sara :)
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Oh Sara , you are so nice to say so. Thank you.
Comment from trimple
Hey Tom
A fabulous triolet poem dedicated to all mothers everywhere.
A poem with such affection, beautifully crafted.
I really enjoyed this super write
Kind regards
Tracey
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Hey Tom
A fabulous triolet poem dedicated to all mothers everywhere.
A poem with such affection, beautifully crafted.
I really enjoyed this super write
Kind regards
Tracey
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thank you Tracey. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Capricorn30
Lovely poem, very well-written;
A mother's love, her gentle touches are like no other love we will experience--a fine dedication to the remarkable presence of these special ladies
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Lovely poem, very well-written;
A mother's love, her gentle touches are like no other love we will experience--a fine dedication to the remarkable presence of these special ladies
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thank you Capricorn. Mothers are special.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
This poem is excellent. It has rhyme and rhythm and follows a rhyme scheme. It has excellent imagery and creates a feeling of mother. It is an excellent tribute to mothers.
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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This poem is excellent. It has rhyme and rhythm and follows a rhyme scheme. It has excellent imagery and creates a feeling of mother. It is an excellent tribute to mothers.
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thank you so much Preston. I really like the Triolet format.
Comment from Gungalo
A beautiful Triolet Tom to tribute mothers everywhere. Your repeating lines are just great and I love the whole thing. Happy Mother's Day guy. LOL.
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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A beautiful Triolet Tom to tribute mothers everywhere. Your repeating lines are just great and I love the whole thing. Happy Mother's Day guy. LOL.
Comment Written 11-May-2013
reply by the author on 11-May-2013
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Thank you Gungalo. Sane to you!
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Smile.
