Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

I just read this wonderful poem, it was written so well with words well chosen...I know you had a great time with your Grandson..I like it most of all, as it shows that some times it not necessary to spend money to enjoy the beautiful things life has to offer..This was a pleasure to read and I thank you for sharing it with us.

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 09-May-2013

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reply by the author on 09-May-2013

Thank you Victoria. You brought a smile to me as you shared the joy of my experience.

reply by mrsmajor on 09-May-2013

You are most welcome it was a pleasure!
Hugs

Comment from poetbear

Exceptional

Perfect day and perfect poem.
Reads and flows well.
Makes sense and really touches the heart.
It as great feeling and many will relate.
Great annual Fathers' day read.

 Comment Written 07-May-2013

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reply by the author on 08-May-2013

Thank you Poetbear. Your review was wonderful and the stars much appreciated.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

What a wonderful way for you and your grandson to share quality time :-)
excellent use of envelope rhyming
I love the point you make - you don't have to take a child to Disney World to show him a good time - there are plenty of free activities that are filled with fun and make memories :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 07-May-2013

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reply by the author on 07-May-2013

Thank you Brooke. Yes, I'm glad you gathered that point.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your visit with your grandson;
Time certainly well-spent as the two of you greeted the lovely songbirds which so enrich our lives with sweet melodies and bold colors

 Comment Written 07-May-2013

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reply by the author on 07-May-2013

Thank you Capricorn for that delightful review.

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

This poetry transports the reader to a warm and loving
moment. It held my interest from start to finish. The
attached illustration is a huge mirror that reflects
the message. Thank You for your creation.

 Comment Written 07-May-2013

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reply by the author on 07-May-2013

Thank you so much Black_Oxygen. I really appreciate your review and stars.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

i enjoyed reading this, treischel, it is great to just spend time with your grandson and having quality time together. i enjoyed reading this one. made me smile

 Comment Written 07-May-2013

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reply by the author on 07-May-2013

Thank you sweetwoodjax. If I made you smile, I a happy too.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your well-written, moving poem gives fresh new meaning to expressions like "The best things in life are free." Yes, they are. Good job

 Comment Written 07-May-2013

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reply by the author on 07-May-2013

Thanks you Janice. I couldn't agee more.

reply by the author on 07-May-2013

Thanks you Janice. I couldn't agee more.

Comment from Sararb

Excellent

I love this cute whimsical poem of you and your grandson watching the birds feed. Birds are so interesting to watch, and they are so many different species of them. What an educational day for your grandson too! Nice flow to your writing, and the rhyming was superb. Sararb :)

 Comment Written 06-May-2013

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reply by the author on 06-May-2013

Thanks Sara. It was a wonderful day for ne too.

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

What a lovely verse Tom. Nothing like Grandpa, Grandson and nature.
I can't imagine a better day. Thank you for sharing a beautiful
adventure with your grandson. Smiles. Robin :)

 Comment Written 05-May-2013

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reply by the author on 05-May-2013

Thank you Robin. i knew it would strike a cord with you. Smiles back.

reply by Robin Gilmor on 05-May-2013

Absolutely. :)

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

ah this is lovely Tom and reminds us what is more important in life - love of course, though a few quid helps methinks :) best wishes, Indie

 Comment Written 05-May-2013

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reply by the author on 05-May-2013

Thanks Indie, a few quid never hurt. And a little quid pro quo.