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Comment from poetbear
You need a microcassette recorder in your night table s you can quickly record masterpieces to be so they are not lost to dreams.
This is s relatable to the poets here.
It reads well and make sense.
Great image.
You have captured writers' Lament well.
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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You need a microcassette recorder in your night table s you can quickly record masterpieces to be so they are not lost to dreams.
This is s relatable to the poets here.
It reads well and make sense.
Great image.
You have captured writers' Lament well.
Comment Written 17-May-2013
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Thank you poetbear. I'm sure many relate.
Comment from wiljacro
HI! Treischel. When I was working in Sales, I used to keep a note pad by my bed because I would very often wake in the night with good ideas. How I sometimes wish that I still kept that habit as words seem to flow in endless rhyme, in the hours of darkness only to disappear as the Sun strikes the window panes. Ain't life a bitch, sometimes?
wiljacro.
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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HI! Treischel. When I was working in Sales, I used to keep a note pad by my bed because I would very often wake in the night with good ideas. How I sometimes wish that I still kept that habit as words seem to flow in endless rhyme, in the hours of darkness only to disappear as the Sun strikes the window panes. Ain't life a bitch, sometimes?
wiljacro.
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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Thank you wiljacro. Yup, it sure is. I see you can definitely relate.
Comment from Debra White
Hi :)
I've been there!
I dream poetry all night long and when I wake up, my head is full of drivel!
You however, have kept your eloquent ZZZ's fresh in the forefront of your mind and here it is for all to see :)
It reads so pleasingly and looks wonderful. Nice alliteration throughout.
I like this bit - clever, like building blocks!
'Each
Word
Deftly
Laid '
Really really enjoyable :) Debra
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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Hi :)
I've been there!
I dream poetry all night long and when I wake up, my head is full of drivel!
You however, have kept your eloquent ZZZ's fresh in the forefront of your mind and here it is for all to see :)
It reads so pleasingly and looks wonderful. Nice alliteration throughout.
I like this bit - clever, like building blocks!
'Each
Word
Deftly
Laid '
Really really enjoyable :) Debra
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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Thank you Debra. Ah yes, and what true poet could not relate? Thank you for you sweet review. Anon!
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You're welcome :)
Comment from lorijean
This really made me laugh out loud, isn't it just the way, you were doing so well, I saw a best seller there, was getting really exciting but it was gone.....
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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This really made me laugh out loud, isn't it just the way, you were doing so well, I saw a best seller there, was getting really exciting but it was gone.....
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thank you lorijean . Glad I could make you laugh. I really appreciate your shower of stars.
Comment from 9999pool
The best poem in the world and recognized as the next great master in the poetic world. Red carpet arrival and departure with just one single poem that can beat the brains out, so to speak. it was so great - while it lasted.
The alphabets kept crawling in and out and the poem remain lost in a dream. And a dreaming poet will always dream.
Excellent write and much more refreshing and exciting than the Picture Poems of late (mainly descriptive type).
Great write but out of sixers. This poem about dreams that many wrote about but it stands out being very simple, nicely structured and brings out a feeling of sheer joy and happiness and made us want to read that poem in the dream, smiles.
Cheerio, keep the good work coming with more emphasis on feelings and emotions of humans and nature perhaps, to get more readership? Variety is the spice of poems.
The latest new style format called "Trequas" by Jim Lorson Sr has a quatrain of 3 syllables each line , rhyming optional and minimum 3 quatrains - pushing poetry to the limits!
Great write and cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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The best poem in the world and recognized as the next great master in the poetic world. Red carpet arrival and departure with just one single poem that can beat the brains out, so to speak. it was so great - while it lasted.
The alphabets kept crawling in and out and the poem remain lost in a dream. And a dreaming poet will always dream.
Excellent write and much more refreshing and exciting than the Picture Poems of late (mainly descriptive type).
Great write but out of sixers. This poem about dreams that many wrote about but it stands out being very simple, nicely structured and brings out a feeling of sheer joy and happiness and made us want to read that poem in the dream, smiles.
Cheerio, keep the good work coming with more emphasis on feelings and emotions of humans and nature perhaps, to get more readership? Variety is the spice of poems.
The latest new style format called "Trequas" by Jim Lorson Sr has a quatrain of 3 syllables each line , rhyming optional and minimum 3 quatrains - pushing poetry to the limits!
Great write and cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Wow! Thank you Ritchie, a very impressive review.
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Hi Tom,
Welcome.
If my review is very long it meant that it is very good. Wink.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-expressed poem, as many a time the perfect writing presents itself at non-opportune times;
Nice alliteration presented in so fine a fashion, as the best literary dreams can be so greatly out-of-reach.
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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A well-expressed poem, as many a time the perfect writing presents itself at non-opportune times;
Nice alliteration presented in so fine a fashion, as the best literary dreams can be so greatly out-of-reach.
Comment Written 03-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Thanks Capricorn. Sounds like you can relate.
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Yes, I definitely can, Treischel;
So many nights as I'm ready to fall asleep, I get creative, and then it vanishes as the night goes on!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend we do get ideas for poems as we go to sleep or dream but when we wake up they do fade well done on this write I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend we do get ideas for poems as we go to sleep or dream but when we wake up they do fade well done on this write I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 03-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Thank you Jill. Sounds like you can relate.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a great poem my friend I like it very much I love the way it rolled off the tongue when I read it out loud I like the picture thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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This is a great poem my friend I like it very much I love the way it rolled off the tongue when I read it out loud I like the picture thank you for sharing
Comment Written 03-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Thanks dmt glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Enrique28
A fine verse indeed with a most amusing twist at the end. A reflection of reality conveyed with excellent poetic freedom. Very aptly illustrated. Good show!
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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A fine verse indeed with a most amusing twist at the end. A reflection of reality conveyed with excellent poetic freedom. Very aptly illustrated. Good show!
Comment Written 03-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Thank you for your visit and comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Gungalo
When morning's light
Kissed
The dawn
Like bursting bubble
I woke up
It was
Gone
Tom you could have done this as a Tanka but you chose to drag it out. It's not a bad poem at all. Not all poems must be long to be good.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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When morning's light
Kissed
The dawn
Like bursting bubble
I woke up
It was
Gone
Tom you could have done this as a Tanka but you chose to drag it out. It's not a bad poem at all. Not all poems must be long to be good.
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thanks Gungalo. So true, I could have. I just went with the flow. I appreciate the comment. I guess I'll work on that since your the second one to mention length this week.
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The content is more important Tom.
