You Bring Out Me
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Comment from ronnie k
Great job, exercise huh you must be in great shape because this is a wonderful write, as far as length I could and would welcome the reading of a coupler more pages.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Great job, exercise huh you must be in great shape because this is a wonderful write, as far as length I could and would welcome the reading of a coupler more pages.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much for your kind review and stars. I am glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from Mike K2
I guess I am your everything? I enjoyed this well written poem and how it conveys to the reader how you are affects them and their mood. You definitely covered all the bases!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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I guess I am your everything? I enjoyed this well written poem and how it conveys to the reader how you are affects them and their mood. You definitely covered all the bases!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from kleck140
Well written with all the emotions we encounter in
life. Poetry is usually difficult for me to interpert,
but you kept my attention and I related well to your
writing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Well written with all the emotions we encounter in
life. Poetry is usually difficult for me to interpert,
but you kept my attention and I related well to your
writing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much for your kind review and stars. I am glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
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Your are welcome
Comment from PoeticXscape
This was an amazing poem. While I was reading it I felt like I was slowly seeing your soul and what an incredible soul it is. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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This was an amazing poem. While I was reading it I felt like I was slowly seeing your soul and what an incredible soul it is. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much for your kind review and stars. I am glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from country ranch writer
LONG OR SHORT YOU SURE HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS AND NAILED IT TO A TEE, I AM A LEO TOO AND IT WAS FUNNY THIS CAME UP AS I WAS TAKING TO MY HUSBAND I HAVEN'T SEEN MANY SIGNS ON HERE AND WHAT DO YOU KNOW
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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LONG OR SHORT YOU SURE HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS AND NAILED IT TO A TEE, I AM A LEO TOO AND IT WAS FUNNY THIS CAME UP AS I WAS TAKING TO MY HUSBAND I HAVEN'T SEEN MANY SIGNS ON HERE AND WHAT DO YOU KNOW
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Isn't it funny how that happens. Thank you so very much for the kind review~Debbie
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WELCOME
Comment from turtledove
You bring a tear to me! Thanks for the beautiful thoughts Debbie:) Great writing exercise. Brilliant idea without the punctuation, seems to flow without...turtledove
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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You bring a tear to me! Thanks for the beautiful thoughts Debbie:) Great writing exercise. Brilliant idea without the punctuation, seems to flow without...turtledove
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am glad you could 'feel' what this poem is about~Debbie
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You're Welcome! td:)
Comment from Deborah Marie
I'm making up for lost time in reviewing... Your poem surely is exceptional and so is the photo and color scheme. Excellent use of "You bring out..." Wonderful progression, rhythm, flow as well as clever use of descriptive wording for impressive imagery for an exceptional read. Thanks for sharing, Deb
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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I'm making up for lost time in reviewing... Your poem surely is exceptional and so is the photo and color scheme. Excellent use of "You bring out..." Wonderful progression, rhythm, flow as well as clever use of descriptive wording for impressive imagery for an exceptional read. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 28-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you again, my friend~Debbie
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You're most welcome, Deb
Comment from JM daSilva
What I can say is that the person brings everything in you, good and bad feelings. The person is important to you because this person brings out so many things. Leading a passive existence is bad, so it's good when someone moves you to action.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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What I can say is that the person brings everything in you, good and bad feelings. The person is important to you because this person brings out so many things. Leading a passive existence is bad, so it's good when someone moves you to action.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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How true. We sometimes need others (or a blank sheet of paper) to draw us out. Sometimes, I prefer the paper. It is usually easier to get along with. Thank you so much, my friend~Debbie
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Paper is easier, but communicating here is great, isn't it?
Comment from emjaihammond
This is very well written. I think it to be a great idea to explore all of the things one brings out in me, whether it be good or bad. You have done that beautifully. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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This is very well written. I think it to be a great idea to explore all of the things one brings out in me, whether it be good or bad. You have done that beautifully. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much for the beautiful review~Debbie
Comment from tedanytime
The words you use are full of color and emotion. Dynamic stanzas expound the multi-faceted person writer is.
This verse is a compliment to some loved one or acquaintance, who brings out so many remarkable qualities.
Well done! Please accept a shower of stars.....
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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The words you use are full of color and emotion. Dynamic stanzas expound the multi-faceted person writer is.
This verse is a compliment to some loved one or acquaintance, who brings out so many remarkable qualities.
Well done! Please accept a shower of stars.....
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and stars~Debbie
