Little Poems
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Comment from TAB_that's me
You did a good job with this writing prompt and meet the rules and syllable count. Belligerent bird and daffy duck are certainly two different perspectives.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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You did a good job with this writing prompt and meet the rules and syllable count. Belligerent bird and daffy duck are certainly two different perspectives.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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Thank you Tab. A little looney tune humor.
Comment from Matthew M.
I think this is a very cute poem that goes very well with the picture. It is funny to think of birds having a private party, but hey don't well just want to hang out with our friends. That bird has quite the harem going on, so I can see why he wants to keep the others away. I liked the alliteration in this poem.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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I think this is a very cute poem that goes very well with the picture. It is funny to think of birds having a private party, but hey don't well just want to hang out with our friends. That bird has quite the harem going on, so I can see why he wants to keep the others away. I liked the alliteration in this poem.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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Thank you Matthew. Glad you enjoyed the party.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend I found some of it to be a bit od a tongue twister well done I enjoyed this well presented poem regards Jill
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend I found some of it to be a bit od a tongue twister well done I enjoyed this well presented poem regards Jill
Comment Written 20-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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Thanks Jill. Hope it got untwisted OK.
